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[{"comment":"I find the murderer's accusing the executioner of murder to be ironic in the extreme. Of course a good man could do what the executioner does; his job, while grim, is morally good. But the murderer, set to die, cannot or will not see that.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ferris-shaw\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2920484\/thumbnail_d6644f8d2f94d51d43c37a7121cf4acff64cb136.jpg","author_name":"Ferris Shaw"},{"comment":"What a powerful punch this story packs! Really well written - you build up the tension ever so subtly with the realistic-sounding dialogue between uncle and nephew. Bravo!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shirley-medhurst\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/76e8daf43b51c7469b266d37aab6e3ed52f679bc.png","author_name":"Shirley Medhurst"},{"comment":"Thank you very much, Shirley. Pleased you enjoyed it. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-miller-b3a1a4\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1060274bc90076809718cff9566db8eaab1abfb5.png","author_name":"Chris Miller"},{"comment":"I've heard that hangings are a very precise thing to calculate, but this puts that reality into sharper focus. Well done. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kailani-bonam\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/560224\/thumbnail_597ae4a52c416f23eeb6f6faffaec7ca5fda0490.jpg","author_name":"Kailani Bonam"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading, Kailani.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-miller-b3a1a4\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1060274bc90076809718cff9566db8eaab1abfb5.png","author_name":"Chris Miller"},{"comment":"This is unapologetically dark and I love it. We\u2019re rooting for Albert to see the light but we know it\u2019s not going to happen. A really cool depiction of executioners, though I couldn\u2019t quite get a read on when exactly this historical fiction takes place. Makes sense that Albert used to be a butcher\u2019s apprentice, he\u2019s probably already desensitized to animal death, and that\u2019s the first step to becoming desensitized to human death.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/luciano-cortese\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3b0e58d43975a3d1f168d4bdb1086aaeae91316a.png","author_name":"Luciano Cortese"},{"comment":"Thanks Luciano. It's set in the '50s, but there isn't much to give the time away unless you already knew a little bit about Albert Pierrepoint. Maybe a line about his post war work would have helped fix it. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-miller-b3a1a4\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1060274bc90076809718cff9566db8eaab1abfb5.png","author_name":"Chris Miller"},{"comment":"Thanks Luciano. It's set in the '50s, but there isn't much to give the time away unless you already knew a little bit about Albert Pierrepoint. Maybe a line about his post war work would have helped fix it. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-skye\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2691889\/thumbnail_9b124c9289fbb8045cfcd4f4328d00bc615713e6.jpg","author_name":"Tom Skye"},{"comment":"Thanks very much, Tom. Your comment has made my day. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-miller-b3a1a4\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1060274bc90076809718cff9566db8eaab1abfb5.png","author_name":"Chris Miller"},{"comment":"This is very well-written! I love the juxtaposing between the dirty work and the clean halls, intaking facts and figures as a way of coping with killing a human being. When something so dark becomes so practiced there's tips of the trade.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/trevor-berndt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2997664\/thumbnail_aad2b0c31c924a83d794a24a51ef9cc21114ad8d.jpg","author_name":"Trevor Berndt"},{"comment":"Thank you, Trevor. Pleased you enjoyed it. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-miller-b3a1a4\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1060274bc90076809718cff9566db8eaab1abfb5.png","author_name":"Chris Miller"},{"comment":"Thank you, Trevor. Pleased you enjoyed it. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michal-przywara\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1713834\/thumbnail_301012be3a0fec02410378b488b6176f8dfa6c62.jpg","author_name":"Micha\u0142 Przywara"},{"comment":"Thanks Michal. It's a very grim, but fascinating thing to think about. I had a bit about how the process was mechanised\/industrialised linked to him being a butcher and equipment like the guillotine and electric chair, but it was all getting a bit flabby. It makes more sense if he doesn't think too deeply about it. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-miller-b3a1a4\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1060274bc90076809718cff9566db8eaab1abfb5.png","author_name":"Chris Miller"},{"comment":"Chilling tale. You tell so well.Thanks for liking my Hometown Boy","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading, Mary.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-miller-b3a1a4\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1060274bc90076809718cff9566db8eaab1abfb5.png","author_name":"Chris Miller"}]