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Vanishing Point

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Howard Halsall
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[{"comment":"What a tragic tale, very well told!I was totally on the edge of my seat at the moment of the defibrillator. Your descriptions of teetering between life and death were so vivid. Well done \ud83d\udc4f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shirley-medhurst\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/76e8daf43b51c7469b266d37aab6e3ed52f679bc.png","author_name":"Shirley Medhurst"},{"comment":"Hi Shirley,Thank you for taking the time to read my latest story and share your thoughts; they\u2019re much appreciated.Take careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"A tragic loss that shouldn\u2019t have been. Thanks Howard!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-corr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/399226\/thumbnail_f852c236b7887828e167de7dd0aa8da34d3823a9.jpg","author_name":"Karen Corr"},{"comment":"Hey Karen,Thank you for reading my latest. I hope you enjoyed it\u2026Take careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"Aww the last line really hurt. He was only 27 :(Well done !","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-lynn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/2ca7120f8aaf830ff2b38d1ab1e7d1d5b0e8cd5b.png","author_name":"Hannah Lynn"},{"comment":"Hey Hannah,Thank you for reading my story and sharing your thoughts. Concerning your comment about the age, you know what they say; \u201dOnly the good die young\u2026.\u201dTake careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"Liked it! \ud83d\udc4d I Loved the descriptions, they are exceptional! I'm sorry he's wandering forever. Check out my story - a different type of ending for a ghost. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/andrea-corwin\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2689773\/thumbnail_1f16abfacc545ff5ccc10f2817fe294b0fc22e16.jpg","author_name":"Andrea Corwin"},{"comment":"Hey Andrea,Thank you for reading story and sharing your positive thoughts; they\u2019re much appreciated. Take careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"I liked your use of imagery throughout this story. It lightened the heavier load of the death. The image of the deflating party balloon contrasted his life leaking out like the air nicely. And quite the existential ending here! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/nina-h\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2721494\/thumbnail_d2311cfba60fcd1dc37e2da36b7ef2cdd0d1bc60.jpg","author_name":"Nina H"},{"comment":"Hi Nina,Thank you for reading my story and sharing your thoughts. I\u2019m glad you enjoyed it and pleased you appreciated the use of imagery. I was trying to paint a visual sub text which can be tricky at times and embarrassing when it\u2019s done badly, so it\u2019s relief to discover I might have achieved a modest level of success.Take careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"I smiled at your reply because I feel the same way about writing. I worry it missed the mark at times, and hold my breath at how it\u2019s taken. I think you wrote this well and I enjoyed the use of visuals and how you painted them! \ud83d\udc4f\ud83c\udffb","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/nina-h\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2721494\/thumbnail_d2311cfba60fcd1dc37e2da36b7ef2cdd0d1bc60.jpg","author_name":"Nina H"},{"comment":"Aw shucks :) ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"Hi Howard.Your story is so visceral and raw when it came to the brutal end of life scenes, I was unable to stop reading. An excellent read and what an apt conclusion. A great sense of a wasted life. Well done. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-a-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2116734\/thumbnail_2f094db3ef787573fdf14b24d0ba13d085955cdd.jpg","author_name":"Helen A Smith"},{"comment":"Hi Helen,Thank you for reading my story and sharing your thoughts. It sounds like you thoroughly enjoyed it and that\u2019s as much as any writer can ask for\u2026.Take careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"The story is relatable in today\u2019s hyper connected world. Keep your own eyes up sir. \ud83d\ude0a","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tim-shuman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2983956\/thumbnail_762c388ec99764dfe79ed7d9e72b29f5dd9db723.jpg","author_name":"Tim Shuman"},{"comment":"Hi Tim,I\u2019ll take your advice and also thank you for reading my story and responding. I\u2019m pleased you enjoyed and glad it rang true.Take careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"An easy read full of emotion, well done mate.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/gareth-walcroft\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1642920\/thumbnail_162e8edc1197491f8156cc455ab45f7b93bada0e.jpg","author_name":"Gareth Walcroft"},{"comment":"Hi Gareth,Thank you for your positive thoughts and encouragement; very much appreciated.Take careHH","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"},{"comment":"Great story, and very well told!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/vicki-lynne-ferris\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/11d995d5f71245b166a93be07bdc2415c55379d5.png","author_name":"Vicki Lynne Ferris"},{"comment":"Phone hazard.Thanks for liking my 'Run,Forest, Run'","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Very succinct :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/howard-halsall\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639621\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Howard Halsall"}]