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The Wrapping Paper Store

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Alyssa Telgenhoff
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[{"comment":"A nice, sweet story that many of us can relate to. I think many of us are guilty of moaning about the stores that get Christmassy too soon and play the same old songs on repeat, but we'd all miss it if it wasn't there.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/daniel-allen\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1684611\/thumbnail_f6efb803902dcd15eac763ab7c4d777803d78024.jpg","author_name":"Daniel Allen"},{"comment":"Exactly! Especially when I was a teenager. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"I really liked the twist here that the store held sentimental value for her. Those first holiday and Saturday jobs we do, they make such a big impression, even if we don't realise it at the time.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles"},{"comment":"Yes! I completely agree! And thank you!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Well done on the shortlist. \ud83e\udd17","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles"},{"comment":"Thank you!! I was so excited when I saw! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Very cute! I think it's often overlooked how sentimental a place can become to us and how hard it might be to leave it behind, even when it's for the best. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tori-robinson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1839970\/thumbnail_3ff12e3d555be37a43ade94caf22d3c691665f1a.jpg","author_name":"Tori Robinson"},{"comment":"I totally agree! My last job was like that","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Funny lines and emotional moments...a very nice story.Ok, I'll take your challenge. I've always believed I have the smartest dog in the world-Hooker. He isn't just smarter than any other dog, he is smarter than a dog...but I never tested his reading skills. So, I printed your story and laid it out on the floor for him...right next to his dog dish...so he can read it while he enjoys his supper. I will let you know his reaction.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/murray-burns\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1634510\/thumbnail_75ec2604a5fb22326a25096e289843ff4def8c12.jpg","author_name":"Murray Burns"},{"comment":"Haha, let me how it goes!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Hello, I'm japanese high school student.I first read this story at a certain practice exam. Then, I couldn't focus on reading your story as a work because I was desperate to solve quetions.But,this work had remained subtle in my memory and finally, I discovered this one on this site. I'm sorry to write with poor vocabulary and grammer.Thank you for reading entire","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/y-y-ea5f27\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2794592\/thumbnail_fb4e68886816ba705f863fffccc25dca907d5d1c.jpg","author_name":"Y Y"},{"comment":"Thank you! I appreciate your words!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"i love it","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alina-mccullough\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2476713\/thumbnail_51fa4bd93a1843eead7f7e64c7885313b01b8f93.jpg","author_name":"Alina McCullough"},{"comment":"Well, I never experienced this, yet I found this short story so lovely and sweet.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/khyati-sharma\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2530805\/thumbnail_9bf919d472b3fa6321ee4a49694f2cdbd0325e10.jpg","author_name":"Khyati Sharma"},{"comment":"Well, I never experienced this, yet I found this short story so lovely and sweet.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-robert\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2276338\/thumbnail_37e9703360dca8de37317271a202452ce738db98.jpg","author_name":"Emily Robert"},{"comment":"I have friends who have worked at stores just like these and you really did a great job capturing that experience.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/315b39a0fc19fb45d146c17b813d46c7acb0b872.png","author_name":"Kevin B"},{"comment":"Thank you! I appreciate that!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Emotional attachment. Congrats.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Thank you! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Oh nOOO, THE TOWN IS GOING TO BE SO SAD ABOUT THE STORE CLOSING!!! I didn't think I'd get sentimental, but here I am...Super cute and cozy story! I love small town vibes, they feel like home. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/e-b-bullet\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1100238\/thumbnail_a9b8ddc2387ecc6d549a60de4473e49e738ce851.jpg","author_name":"E. B. Bullet"},{"comment":"Thank you!! I appreciate that :) ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Such a sweet story. Perfect for the holidays! Love how you described the small town -a nice blend of traditional and quirky-that you captured so well. Happy holidays.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/wally-schmidt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2197990\/thumbnail_25078a88fc6eac69aeb4facbfbd2f9032f93426f.jpg","author_name":"Wally Schmidt"},{"comment":"I appreciate your comment so much! Thank you! Happy holidays :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"The little reveal at the end of the story made me go back and re-read the story to see what I missed. I appreciated the relationship between the girls and the boss; it was quite realistic, especially for small-town people. Polite but still truthful. Faith echoed this in her observations of a couple of people. That was quite well done. The humor was spot on as well.Family over everything. Good message. Good story, Alyssa.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/delbert-griffith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1111238\/thumbnail_d0c7b70d609e12434d50b6774916c96829485f66.jpg","author_name":"Delbert Griffith"},{"comment":"I appreciate your comment so much! Thank you for reading! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"This story is so wonderful. I love the theme of choosing your family over yourself, and I love the quirky setting you placed the story into. Well done!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/starry-skies\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2217096\/thumbnail_c1e95b493fdea626d7161b72c37bb07587b686f0.jpg","author_name":"Starry Skies"},{"comment":"Thank you! I appreciate your comment!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"It worked.Clapping.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tommy-goround\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1810729\/thumbnail_aa576c3db9478034a40fa19154a6978dbfde96ba.jpg","author_name":"Tommy Goround"},{"comment":"Thank you!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Loved it - well done! :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/wendy-kaminski\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2102085\/thumbnail_d795bf416bd1163e3d0752f2a81ec02c47960877.jpg","author_name":"Wendy Kaminski"},{"comment":"Thank you!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Awesome well written and very captivating ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michael-telgenhoff-015f0c\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2226267\/thumbnail_bf4cbae280a7f2fd564f95f8f07384838c85ccba.jpg","author_name":"Michael Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Thank you!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"Feels just like a hallmark movie! cozy! I wanna grab a cup of hot chocolate now","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/joseph-russo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2226264\/thumbnail_0762e11961ee436879b55b6cc7f3f2cd130d3f31.jpg","author_name":"Joseph Russo"},{"comment":"Thank you! Pour one for me too lol","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"},{"comment":"I really enjoyed this story!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/angie-brocker\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1836045\/thumbnail_0b49d82f4e00e3d16f03fd942c5c8f44e24776be.jpg","author_name":"Angie Brocker"},{"comment":"Thank you!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alyssa-telgenhoff\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/982980\/thumbnail_be2d8db6415dafddf7a86994f415b43442d2afdb.jpg","author_name":"Alyssa Telgenhoff"}]