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Eric D.
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[{"comment":"I enjoyed your story. There were a lot of characters in it that made it a little tricky to keep track of everyone. I like the description of the father in the first paragraph. It was interesting to read about different cultural traditions from mine.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/glenna-agnew\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/517527\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Glenna Agnew"},{"comment":"Thanks Glenna for reading it, glad you enjoyed it. I may have tried to squeeze too much into the 3000 word limit! I appreciate your feedback. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/eric-d\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1160277\/thumbnail_bb52064b0f8bca9b01e6a3d22d12aabcdbda8767.jpg","author_name":"Eric D."},{"comment":"Wow, that's such a sweet story! I really loved it. It made me cry a bit at the end but in a good way. It was just beautiful. I really liked all the animals and their different ideas. That was a really cool concept. Excellent story! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annalisa-d\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1154699\/thumbnail_39eb5849a1dc5c150f3ad6c69c6e5988e16671d4.jpg","author_name":"Annalisa D."},{"comment":"Thanks Anna, it means a lot. Glad you liked it, I intertwined a lot of what my family is like in some character and tried to channel how they expressed themselves during those hard times. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/eric-d\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1160277\/thumbnail_bb52064b0f8bca9b01e6a3d22d12aabcdbda8767.jpg","author_name":"Eric D."},{"comment":"Well done, Eric. Beautiful lyrical language. A pleasure to read.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/bruce-friedman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1327343\/thumbnail_20d421a30cfe46dd250d167fdb9d8069424b3635.jpg","author_name":"Bruce Friedman"},{"comment":"Thanks Bruce! I appreciate you checking it out! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/eric-d\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1160277\/thumbnail_bb52064b0f8bca9b01e6a3d22d12aabcdbda8767.jpg","author_name":"Eric D."}]