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"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-logue\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2666602\/thumbnail_4d93692a133d5538f69c328d8b1e9e5006ffd2b6.jpg","author_name":"Kevin Logue","comment":"Congratulations Audrey! \ud83d\ude01\ud83c\udf89"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/315b39a0fc19fb45d146c17b813d46c7acb0b872.png","author_name":"Kevin B","comment":"This was so much fun. I love when somebody really leans into comedy on here, because we definitely need more of it. Well done!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox","comment":"Thank you! Comedy is my favorite, so I try to have fun with my writing."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson","comment":"Congrats on shortlist\ud83e\udd73"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/aditi-kumar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/657808\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Aditi Kumar","comment":"Cheeky! I really enjoyed the ending. Just a suggestion - I would maybe add a line explaining why Caleb thinks his urge to you-know-what is so sinful. For example, are his parents very religious? I feel that would make the ending even funnier and more of a punch. Otherwise, very well written!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox","comment":"Thank you. I totally agree with this note. My first draft had a whole narrative framing of Caleb being in church and telling this story in confession, which ended up cutting because it felt like it took too long to get into the meat of this story. But you're absolutely right that I could benefit from giving some more insight into where he developed his toxic religious fear of sexuality."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles","comment":"\u201cBut magic is not a suitable substitute for condoms, remember that.\u201d That is some life advice if I ever heard any! I like the foreshadowing of Caleb's urges and how you tied it into the grandmother's witchiness. This was short but you packed a lot in there. Would love to try one of their magical M&M cookies!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/derrick-m-domican\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2566755\/thumbnail_983972abc17d60193ea1febb8b982ac456426162.jpg","author_name":"Derrick M Domican","comment":"Great story, nice bonding moment between the two and the grandmother passing on her wisdom in a nonchalant matter of fact way like grandmother's do! Lovely writing."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox","comment":"Thank you! I wasn't quite sure where I was going to go with this prompt, and it ended up being a lot more optimistic and hopeful than I had expected."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-andrews\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1970364\/thumbnail_e336196083a0356b7fef1cc7303eeaf55515fb97.jpg","author_name":"Hannah Andrews","comment":"Loved. My favorite line.. Grandma blinked as if remembering something, then quickly added \u201cBut magic is not a suitable substitute for condoms, remember that.\u201d Wisdom for the ages!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox","comment":"hehe thank you I just wanted to acknowledge that we can't rely on magic for everything! ;) that would be irresponsible. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-skye\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2691889\/thumbnail_9b124c9289fbb8045cfcd4f4328d00bc615713e6.jpg","author_name":"Tom Skye","comment":"Great story with an educational message.Thanks for sharing. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor","comment":"Witch? Ha, many walking around everywhere these days. Congrats."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jonathan-page\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2792537\/thumbnail_f2f48d44f760728d0c5aaba532bbf3b068c14409.jpg","author_name":"Jonathan Page","comment":"Great coming-of-age story. You did a fantastic job with the plotting and describing the Google searches and the protagonist's reaction to the changing reality, contrasted with changing knowledge of Grandmother. Loved the line: \u201cBut magic is not a suitable substitute for condoms, remember that.\u201d All-in-all a great read. Congrats!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-lynn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/2ca7120f8aaf830ff2b38d1ab1e7d1d5b0e8cd5b.png","author_name":"Hannah Lynn","comment":"Congratulations! \ud83d\ude0a"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hazel-ide\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2629606\/thumbnail_57d6cf0e51a90976b8c012b64f5f0b8b404c2366.jpg","author_name":"Hazel Ide","comment":"Great story! I like that it took a surprising turn toward the end, and how you described their relationship. He was somewhat embarrassed by her, but his curiosity of the medallion and her story showed a peek of development for them. It was sweet. Congrats on the shortlist!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles","comment":"Congratulations \ud83c\udf89\ud83c\udf89\ud83c\udf89 and happy Friday to you! Hope you're celebrating!! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox","comment":"Thank you my first one!! I was shocked <3 "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles","comment":"Amazing! Cockroach Girl was put up for it too, I don't know if you saw that. I was really rooting for it. I hope it validates for you what we all know: you're a talented writer! \ud83c\udf89"}]