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[{"comment":"Heartfelt and moving. You had me right from the beginning. Thanks for sharing your tale with us, and congratulations on your win. I look forward to reading more from you. :-)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ernie-olson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1006057\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Ernie Olson"},{"comment":"thank you so much for reading and supporting my writing ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"Amazing story. I was totally brought in. Terrific writing. It\u2019s like you know exactly what looking at death feels like. Awesome !!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/wilma-segeren\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1567036\/thumbnail_19f347227c439b344d716202cae03b19f2b182c8.jpg","author_name":"Wilma Segeren"},{"comment":"Wow things I love to hear, thank you for your comments. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"lol. You're great.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/p-j-byrd\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1628470\/thumbnail_b71560fc75a531c5fe29a9d16cd340106d1a74ad.jpg","author_name":"P.J. Byrd"},{"comment":"Ok LOL back and thanks for reading","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"Congrats Dena! I\u2019m not surprised you won! This was a very moving story. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/heather-c\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1510355\/thumbnail_7370a8412fad50da5d32eb305a61665087a67093.jpg","author_name":"Heather C"},{"comment":"thank you ... it is thrilling my first time! We are all doing this writing stuff together. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"Amazing story, please explain the last sentence for me though! Thank you","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tegan-geiger\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1696976\/thumbnail_d76a8711b95d2ea02f89f1b91874b3bf42fafe85.jpg","author_name":"Tegan Geiger"},{"comment":"Fantastic story! I loved how it was written a little haphazardly to give the reader an idea as to his confusion but it was also clear enough for the reader to understand what was going on. I also got excited because I live by the Pines! Great work :) ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/farrah-leone\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/601347\/thumbnail_a838e46dce5f38b33d4c89332e87693a6f8e9e02.jpg","author_name":"Farrah Leone"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for your feedback. Feedback help writers grow so ... and wild you live in The Pines. On Fire Island. So Cool !!!! I used to like in Brooklyn. :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"Oh my goodness... What a sad and gripping story! I loved how his thoughts translated into actions that were misinterpreted by Cherie, that's a great technique. You describe things really clearly.You also made it more appropriately tragic at the end! Took me a couple of reads to realise what the letter meant but I'm glad you didn't spell it out.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sj-mac\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2957347\/thumbnail_27d6195cf26f75e87e82f974f9c44a2a052b4dc9.jpg","author_name":"SJ Mac"},{"comment":"This one was a masterclass. Well done.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/joel-sommers\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2684550\/thumbnail_4efdb4fed088a54cbebfa4209f2f84943b34b06c.jpg","author_name":"Joel Sommers"},{"comment":"Thanks Joel for reading and your nice feedback. Writers all of us, need enclouragement. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"So raw and in the moment. As a gay man who lost many friends. I just wept. Thank you for sharing. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/eron-thomas\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1065327\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Eron Thomas"},{"comment":"Eron.... wow thank you so much for reading and for your comment. Are you a writer or reader or both?` As a gay man, would you be interested in beta reading and commenting on other stories I write, especially were I am trying to touch something..... I appreciate you feedback, thank you - Dena Linn","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"Wow! I was captured from line 1!GREAT story!Fantastic work!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/f-o-morier\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1170728\/thumbnail_0661e7859ba80da0adb50c8371f6d2b325a97f62.jpg","author_name":"F.O. Morier"},{"comment":"Wow just wow I have no words that was just so good.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/grace-sims\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2363881\/thumbnail_98b1497660c214489d546899205f1a93e41ce95f.jpg","author_name":"Grace Sims"},{"comment":"Touching story of someone dealing with heartbreak, illness and death. Subjects that are often hard to write about. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kelly-l\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/d7fc2445898a8879fcae598a4c99350afb325941.png","author_name":"Kelly L"},{"comment":"thank you Kelly, I just noticed I did not acknowledge your feedback and it is appreciated. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dena-linn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1499357\/thumbnail_4ce0c9ed1eb9a3ee9ff6d3d241e19c8a251e95ca.jpg","author_name":"Dena Linn"},{"comment":"Beautiful, sad story! I so remember those days. Things are different now and still so much the same. You\u2019re a great writer. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sarah-bellinson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1881822\/thumbnail_fb5e6ba49f160574b16fda38c88974d60ef4f808.jpg","author_name":"Sarah Bellinson"},{"comment":"Beautiful, sad story! I so remember those days. Things are different now and still so much the same. You\u2019re a great writer. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mindy-baker-91cb85\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1799711\/thumbnail_ffc15aa5d86b303e9727b89fe22f23d2a74fb6eb.jpg","author_name":"Mindy Baker"},{"comment":"Beautiful, sad story! I so remember those days. Things are different now and still so much the same. You\u2019re a great writer. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/atenaga-monday\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/870792\/thumbnail_c4d4f0af85b9e9062338da1fee465f756a448752.jpg","author_name":"Atenaga Monday"},{"comment":"So sad!! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/susannah-meghans\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1662738\/thumbnail_1193f3df3f7b3ae378e4f7bdd2f544342bda99c2.jpg","author_name":"Susannah Meghans"},{"comment":"Very touching story.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mc-campbell-molly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/507968\/thumbnail_8b753d7317a4336600aa4bbf931b720ea959e9ae.jpg","author_name":"McCampbell Molly"},{"comment":"Love this story.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mc-campbell-molly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/507968\/thumbnail_8b753d7317a4336600aa4bbf931b720ea959e9ae.jpg","author_name":"McCampbell Molly"},{"comment":"Why was this story created?","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ellie-jansen\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1681578\/thumbnail_38ac8ac76d5061d8db0d7d5c17eddf6b78cc4173.jpg","author_name":"ELLIE JANSEN"},{"comment":"Sad his boyfriend couldn't accept his near end life style.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/crystal-coleman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1664486\/thumbnail_87b122c7bbd0e156fea622cd4573fe822e3ab667.jpg","author_name":"Crystal Coleman"},{"comment":"hahaha","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/liyan-abu-shoaib\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1663523\/thumbnail_619ecf7af90f0d6721e21a454418e7c45412fbee.jpg","author_name":"Liyan Abu Shoaib"}]