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Especially funny that you leaped over the climax of the story, leaving us to wonder exactly what the speech was like. It's much better left to our imaginations.A well-deserved win! Congratulations!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much for the kind words KD! You mean you didn't speak like that as an eleven-year-old? : ) "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/elisa-l\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/999456\/thumbnail_1c5ef8545c903edfba0e6bd1134455d221db2d1e.jpg","author_name":"Elisa L.","comment":""Kyle Schwimmer teased me ferociously until the end of the year. But then, Kyle Schwimmer was never, if only for a brief moment, loved by Andrea Taylor."I loved this line, it's my favourite. Keep up the good work!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much Elisa! So appreciate you taking the time to read!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/scott-christenson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1512632\/thumbnail_afc30ec38177d2ec9620254c83d0cd754fcb079c.jpg","author_name":"Scott Christenson","comment":"Brilliant comedy, so many funny lines of taking 11 year old student life seriously, in "solemn solidarity" wearing braces,etc.. Sort of a Confederacy of Dunces unselfaware narrator. I almost wish the tone of slapstick comedy carried through to the ending, as I didn't understand the, I love you (they didn't seem to have any interaction before this) and then she leaves. Maybe this is based on a past experience? But huge congrats on the win, I did get a big laugh out of so many parts of this."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much Scott! Appreciate you taking the time to read, and glad it gave you a laugh or two!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/a-k-pittman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/327969\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"A.K. Pittman","comment":"I thought it was perfect. I did not read it as slapstick funny but instead I read it as an accurate portrayal of adolescent angst. The humorous parts were carefully cupped between this boys innocence and his wild emotions. It was a bittersweet love story. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/scott-christenson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1512632\/thumbnail_afc30ec38177d2ec9620254c83d0cd754fcb079c.jpg","author_name":"Scott Christenson","comment":"I thought it was brilliant too. Especially, some of his prose was stellar. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alguy-457\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2043790\/thumbnail_a8ef6ae92ce40a989ff83b7b0fe8206eee761300.jpg","author_name":"Alguy 457","comment":"Outstanding. Loved it. One cops all the emotions of young love, it made me jealous of your skills lol.Great job Tom well deserved win \ud83c\udfc6 "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much! Your words really are such an encouragement!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/carrol-halliwell\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/307678\/thumbnail_a23a414f0fb059e55e1be1bc008a4b7b63fd6dbd.jpg","author_name":"Carrol Halliwell","comment":"I love, love, love this story. You are an exceptional writer. You must be, because I didn't want the story to end. Congratulations Tom. Oh, and now I'm heading to a dictionary to find out what "panegyric" means. \ud83d\ude02"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/a-k-pittman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/327969\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"A.K. Pittman","comment":"Lol I did look it up! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Full disclosure: I double-checked the definition before using it myself, haha! Thank you so much, and thank you for taking the time to read it!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lori-ann\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1702162\/thumbnail_bb6173cbf843be1275284f5e630722797dbee6ba.jpg","author_name":"Lori Ann","comment":"I could visualize the boy in love. Well done!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you very much Lori! Thanks for reading!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/andrew-fruchtman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1032640\/thumbnail_448b42febe58c96187367f472e5bcf14baecd58e.jpg","author_name":"Andrew Fruchtman","comment":"Wonderfully nostalgic and sweet. Well written and funny. Congrats on the win! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much Andrew! A pleasure to write, and an even greater pleasure to receive such kind words!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/wally-schmidt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2197990\/thumbnail_25078a88fc6eac69aeb4facbfbd2f9032f93426f.jpg","author_name":"Wally Schmidt","comment":"This story perfectly encapsulates the awkwardness and bravery of a middle-schooler in love. What I love the most is that his love is not unrequited, as most first loves are, and that he is able to carry that moment and feeling around for the rest of his life. So well done-congrats on the win!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you very much Wally! I hadn't considered how it might be unique in that respect; I certainly had my share of unrequited, adolescent infatuation as well! So appreciate you reading."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/theresa-anna\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/858537\/thumbnail_1fc7d9b6104fdfe0a8170c4f80bef11d6351ab11.jpg","author_name":"Theresa Anna","comment":"\u201c I used to wish that a bear would burst into the halls of our school, so that I\u2019d have something to behead, something to lay at her feet\u201dAmazing! Laughed out loud reading this. Congrats!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/a-k-pittman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/327969\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"A.K. Pittman","comment":"Yes. That was awesome!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Yes. That was awesome!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/theresa-anna\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/858537\/thumbnail_1fc7d9b6104fdfe0a8170c4f80bef11d6351ab11.jpg","author_name":"Theresa Anna","comment":"Perfect !"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/carla-ward-224109\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/699090\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Carla Ward","comment":"A delightful foray into the abyss of pre-adolescent attraction and infatuation. I loved this. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"That means the world, Carla; thank you so much for reading! Abyss is right!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/maggie-mc-cann\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/4a3a8927b85daa16f0fe11b6bbb759eee3095858.png","author_name":"Maggie McCann","comment":"This was so witty and clever, and a blast to read. I thought that the modern setting, mixed with the almost poetic kind of language you used, made for a very enjoyable story! This was very deserving of the win. Keep up the good work!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you Maggie- so appreciate you reading!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/glenda-toews\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2110894\/thumbnail_580d851b7586145576a0281d3c3fd56e03319d0f.jpg","author_name":"Glenda Toews","comment":"I enjoyed this piece a lot. Well done!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much, Glenda!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ashli-dinkelman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2445049\/thumbnail_ac63a45df41eac1e204446a60b03b778e8f87b0d.jpg","author_name":"Ashli Dinkelman","comment":"Nicely done. It was cute."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you very much Ashli!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/marty-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1602139\/thumbnail_75eb3c3fd993fea5d007ba439de5df3343c8c1b5.jpg","author_name":"Marty B","comment":"Thank you very much Ashli!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you Marty! I had to include it: that post-track-meet-feeling left indelible marks on my soul! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jose-gonzalez\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/660096\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Jose Gonzalez","comment":"Great story and a nice stylistic choice to not include the speech. You allude to it in the end, great choice. Much deserved win "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much Jose! Hope whatever you imagined in its place was satisfying!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anders-beckman-ceaddc\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2187956\/thumbnail_c166b22d24d35abbce65a569b2afc15521a30d5e.jpg","author_name":"ANDERS BECKMAN","comment":"Thank you so much Jose! Hope whatever you imagined in its place was satisfying!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much for writing this Anders; it's very thoughtful, and I'm so appreciative you took the time to read!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anne-wilkins\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/073d87837317093e3a0aadb789649d1ced4e32a6.png","author_name":"Anne Wilkins","comment":"Congratulations, such a clever, witty and actually heart warming story. Your MC had such a unique almost Shakespearian voice filled with old world charm. I love the descriptions of his love, the reference to braces, and how he feels about Kyle Schwimmer. Well done!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much Anne; your kind words mean the world, and encourage me to continue writing!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mason-smith-ecd392\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1739810\/thumbnail_ed6c715c3360bdab86852327274991c22a6e0acf.jpg","author_name":"Mason Smith","comment":"I loved this story. Such wonderful writing, I couldn\u2019t stop reading. Please, keep writing on here so we can see more of your wonderful works.An amazingly well-deserved win."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much Mason; it's very encouraging, and I so appreciate you taking the time to read!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mason-smith-ecd392\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1739810\/thumbnail_ed6c715c3360bdab86852327274991c22a6e0acf.jpg","author_name":"Mason Smith","comment":"I always try to red the winning stories to hopefully better my own writing, but none of the others I have read have been as much of a delight to read as this one."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mason-smith-ecd392\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1739810\/thumbnail_ed6c715c3360bdab86852327274991c22a6e0acf.jpg","author_name":"Mason Smith","comment":"I always try to red the winning stories to hopefully better my own writing, but none of the others I have read have been as much of a delight to read as this one."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mason-smith-ecd392\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1739810\/thumbnail_ed6c715c3360bdab86852327274991c22a6e0acf.jpg","author_name":"Mason Smith","comment":"I always try to red the winning stories to hopefully better my own writing, but none of the others I have read have been as much of a delight to read as this one."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chitralekha-hore\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1254401\/thumbnail_ae8cfdebb71690eccbb2c7975d1010d833b92fef.jpg","author_name":"Chitralekha Hore","comment":"Congratulations on your win! Loved every bit of it. John's character kind of reminded me of Kevin Arnold from The Wonder Years."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-bombadil\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/f8a902b067d4344b687920f92c669bffad7b0e0e.png","author_name":"Tom Bombadil","comment":"Thank you so much Chitralekha; thanks for taking the time to read!"}]