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The Escapist

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Dorian Edgerly
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[{"comment":"Hi Dorian!Welcome welcome and congratulations on the short list! I absolutely adored how terrifying this piece was in the very beginning because I think that I did an amazing job of truly captivating your sci-fi aspect of the piece. The explanation and desperate nature of humanity was beautifully well described, and I adored the way that you decided to end the peace sometimes the best stories do not get to enjoy a happy ending. Nice work!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amanda-lieser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/cf681cfbf3c282528fea28596536f592630842e7.png","author_name":"Amanda Lieser"},{"comment":"I looked at this prompt and thought, No way can anyone come up with something for that, but you did an amazing job. I loved the overtones of different genres. It all mixed together so well.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/315b39a0fc19fb45d146c17b813d46c7acb0b872.png","author_name":"Kevin B"},{"comment":"Thank you! I liked how specific and odd it was. Didn't allow for much overthinking.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dorian-edgerly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263890\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Dorian Edgerly"},{"comment":"Excellent. Very creative. Very convincing. I was sure Lina was real. I thought this was a pretty tough and bizarre prompt, but you pulled it off beautifully.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ken-cartisano\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2341188\/thumbnail_950cf5fcb0d8a96924c8343beddc948381e38ff9.jpg","author_name":"Ken Cartisano"},{"comment":"Thanks a lot! I feel like the bizarreness kept me from going off-track in the early going.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dorian-edgerly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263890\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Dorian Edgerly"},{"comment":"Congrats and welcome.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Thank you! Happy to be here.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dorian-edgerly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263890\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Dorian Edgerly"},{"comment":"Highly welcomed.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Congrats on the shortlist! What an incredible story! Got some Vanilla Sky vibes - "tech support"- mixed in with some Total Recall. But love how you have this protagonist seeking to escape and all-in on getting out of reality! Great stuff.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jonathan-page\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2792537\/thumbnail_f2f48d44f760728d0c5aaba532bbf3b068c14409.jpg","author_name":"Jonathan Page"},{"comment":"Thanks for the feedback! And you nailed it man! Those were the exact vibes I got while writing it!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dorian-edgerly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263890\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Dorian Edgerly"},{"comment":"Congrats on shortlist. Can see why. Great explanation and execution.\ud83e\udd73\ud83c\udf89Welcome aboard.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Thanks! Happy to be here. This seems like a great community! I'm sure I'll post again when I need something to kickstart my writing habit.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dorian-edgerly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263890\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Dorian Edgerly"},{"comment":"Hi Dorian. I enjoyed it and liked the first turn when Lina was different; the subsequent scenarios were also interesting but felt disappointed that it turned out to be Sim. Well written. If you'd like to give my submission a read, I would appreciate it. Thanks! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/arpad-nagy\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/bce92920ac2ab2d8d4e10b6c57a92a794a1677d4.png","author_name":"Arpad Nagy"},{"comment":"Hi Arpad, and thanks for the feedback! The story was less about Lina and the protagonist and more about the dangers of losing oneself completely to escapist habits and activities. I'm sure your disappointment was shared by the protagonist! And I have a little time off coming up this week so I'll definitely give yours a read then! Take care!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dorian-edgerly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263890\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Dorian Edgerly"},{"comment":"Scary sci-fi. Hopefully, not a future world problem. Enjoyed reading. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-corr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/399226\/thumbnail_f852c236b7887828e167de7dd0aa8da34d3823a9.jpg","author_name":"Karen Corr"},{"comment":"Thank you Karen! I hope the same!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dorian-edgerly\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263890\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Dorian Edgerly"}]