Chấn Động! Thiên Kim Toàn Năng Thu Nạp Đàn Em Trong Show Truyền Hình
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Marty B
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[{"comment":"Wow this was a real high adrenaline adventure. Great concept and characters. Definitely felt like it could be expanded to something much longer. So much back story to explore. And everyone loves a talking dog character. All very movie-esque. This was great. Wildly enjoyable.Awesome job. Thanks for sharing","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-skye\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2691889\/thumbnail_9b124c9289fbb8045cfcd4f4328d00bc615713e6.jpg","author_name":"Tom Skye"},{"comment":"'high adrenaline adventure' is great feedback! I was going for extreme twists to see what happened.Thanks! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/marty-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1602139\/thumbnail_75eb3c3fd993fea5d007ba439de5df3343c8c1b5.jpg","author_name":"Marty B"},{"comment":"Absolutely wild! More and more fuel keeps getting added to the fire, and each twist eclipses the last. I suspect Rosie has warmed up to the idea of human interest\/family stories though, given she's just found hers. A graceful, almost E.T. like escape at the end, but I do wonder if something more is going on under the hood. Even the characters note, \u201cHow did they get here so fast?\u201d Perhaps Owen has his own extraterrestrial support? Much to ponder. Thanks for sharing! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michal-przywara\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1713834\/thumbnail_301012be3a0fec02410378b488b6176f8dfa6c62.jpg","author_name":"Micha\u0142 Przywara"},{"comment":"Great catch on Owen, definitely untrustworthy with some suspicious abilities... ;) Thanks!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/marty-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1602139\/thumbnail_75eb3c3fd993fea5d007ba439de5df3343c8c1b5.jpg","author_name":"Marty B"},{"comment":"This is so unique! I loved the parent-trap vibes with the twins meeting randomly, but adding the magical sci-fi powers made it even better. And the space doggo, Nova! I hope Lizzie and Rosie eventually make it back to their home. i can see endless adventures coming from these two! What a cool and creative way to take this prompt! Great job, Marty!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks! I appreciates your good words. Great story this week! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/marty-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1602139\/thumbnail_75eb3c3fd993fea5d007ba439de5df3343c8c1b5.jpg","author_name":"Marty B"}]