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Khadija S. Mohammad
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[{"comment":"What an interesting and fun concept. There is good voice in this story and it feels like a set up for something more. Very interested in reading what comes next, hopefully you will have the chance to tell it.Thanks for sharing","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michelle-oliver\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2149843\/thumbnail_f321e83b32cdb2863ea02a254b03e05c12b04f55.jpg","author_name":"Michelle Oliver"},{"comment":"Great concept! I used to dream about visiting the places in my homework assignments too. \ud83d\ude43 Love how you're writing is growing and I definitely want more of Rymere \u2764\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/cecilia-englishby\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2716010\/thumbnail_fefec121649c5bcce8b8f35cc1838d1ed2359c2c.jpg","author_name":"Cecilia Englishby"},{"comment":"Thank you!! \ud83d\udc9c(Haven't we all?) I'm happy to report that now I can look back on my earlier stories and cringe! \ud83d\ude01 And we're definitely seeing more of Rymere!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/khadija-s-mohammad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2783829\/thumbnail_15fe24630bbc15746025a89324f51a49ad206903.jpg","author_name":"Khadija S. Mohammad"},{"comment":"Mysterious! How was Rymere suddenly good at languages when he never was before and I wonder why he was sleeping in class? But most of all I hope he is safe when he chooses to travel to the Sistine chapel. Intriguing! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-corr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/399226\/thumbnail_f852c236b7887828e167de7dd0aa8da34d3823a9.jpg","author_name":"Karen Corr"},{"comment":"Thank you! \u2764\ufe0f I didn't expect anyone to read it that quickly!I'm really surprised... I wasn't expecting this to be accepted as a complete story, because it isn't. It's the first half of a story, the second half being his actual journey there. (The second half isn't finished yet though).Do you think I should leave it as it is, or add the second half? ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/khadija-s-mohammad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2783829\/thumbnail_15fe24630bbc15746025a89324f51a49ad206903.jpg","author_name":"Khadija S. Mohammad"},{"comment":"It depends on what you are planning, this is \u2018your\u2019 story. I\u2019ll have to read it again later to see if you changed it. \ud83d\ude0a","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-corr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/399226\/thumbnail_f852c236b7887828e167de7dd0aa8da34d3823a9.jpg","author_name":"Karen Corr"},{"comment":"I think I'll leave it as it is for this week - then add a part 2 next week. \ud83d\ude43 Thanks","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/khadija-s-mohammad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2783829\/thumbnail_15fe24630bbc15746025a89324f51a49ad206903.jpg","author_name":"Khadija S. Mohammad"},{"comment":"I don't like this title, but at least it's something \ud83e\udd37\u200d\u2640\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/khadija-s-mohammad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2783829\/thumbnail_15fe24630bbc15746025a89324f51a49ad206903.jpg","author_name":"Khadija S. Mohammad"}]