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Chris Campbell
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[{"comment":"Hey Chris!Oh, and adventure in the desert! I have to say that my favorite exchange within this piece was the one centered around urban dictionary because I thought it was incredibly clever and funny. Sometimes it\u2019s difficult to understand what the next generation is all about, but the fact that you were a writer, writing about words in that exchange was absolutely wonderful. I also thought that the story ended on such a wonderfully humorous note. Nice work!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amanda-lieser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/cf681cfbf3c282528fea28596536f592630842e7.png","author_name":"Amanda Lieser"},{"comment":"Amanda,Thanks for the great feedback.This is part of a series of Aussie-centric tale telling. I'm still waiting for the Urban Dictionary to use my interpretations.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Amanda,Thanks for the great feedback.This is part of a series of Aussie-centric tale telling. I'm still waiting for the Urban Dictionary to use my interpretations.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jenni-bradshaw\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1895228\/thumbnail_cf4d74b653fee3508fb4f34d9257704052b492be.jpg","author_name":"Jenni Bradshaw"},{"comment":"Too right, mate.Good on ya for sending me some great feedback.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Hi ChrisAbsolutely hilarious. I was literally cracking up reading it. Great imagery and dialogue and as with all great comedy, you smashed it with the timing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-a-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2116734\/thumbnail_2f094db3ef787573fdf14b24d0ba13d085955cdd.jpg","author_name":"Helen A Smith"},{"comment":"Thanks, Helen.Much appreciated. So glad to have made you laugh.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Alien aboriginal park rangers, marvellous. I'm now away to look up the melange of new words you've presented me with ha.P.S. no one in work even understood I was insulting them by calling them Cosplayers.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-logue\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2666602\/thumbnail_4d93692a133d5538f69c328d8b1e9e5006ffd2b6.jpg","author_name":"Kevin Logue"},{"comment":"Thanks, Kevin.Hilarious on the Cosplayers comment.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Haha the Aussie bantz was strong in this one. Amazing job setting a scene like that with only dialogue. A throroughly enjoyable read and very very funny.Great job","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-skye\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2691889\/thumbnail_9b124c9289fbb8045cfcd4f4328d00bc615713e6.jpg","author_name":"Tom Skye"},{"comment":"Tom,Thanks for the great feedback.So glad it tickled your funny bone.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Tom,Thanks for the great feedback.So glad it tickled your funny bone.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/delbert-griffith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1111238\/thumbnail_d0c7b70d609e12434d50b6774916c96829485f66.jpg","author_name":"Delbert Griffith"},{"comment":"Delbert,Thank you for more great feedback.I had to do a little research into Aussie slang, as even after 12 years here, I'm still learning new things. Glad you picked up on the irony in the changing our language commentary. As always, English continues to evolve with each generation.Thanks for reading it.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Heh :) I was wondering what people would come up with for this prompt :)An amusing story, and "suspise" - a new word! It's always a good day for a new word.The action in this one is clear, which is crucial for dialogue only. Pretty impressive, when the UFO action starts. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michal-przywara\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1713834\/thumbnail_301012be3a0fec02410378b488b6176f8dfa6c62.jpg","author_name":"Micha\u0142 Przywara"},{"comment":"Thanks, Michal.Would you believe that when I tried to add "Suspise" to the Urban Dictionary, it was already there? I still submitted my version for review, along with "Kangasaur."Thanks for the great feedback.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"I love your dialogue stories Chris! Great fun , brilliant writing as always ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/derrick-m-domican\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2566755\/thumbnail_983972abc17d60193ea1febb8b982ac456426162.jpg","author_name":"Derrick M Domican"},{"comment":"Much appreciated, Derrick.I do enjoy the dialogue writing.Cheers!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Yeah nah mate. Bloody coles commercial is ringing in my head now. Thanks! You have a gift of bringing the Australian accent to life in written form. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michelle-oliver\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2149843\/thumbnail_f321e83b32cdb2863ea02a254b03e05c12b04f55.jpg","author_name":"Michelle Oliver"},{"comment":"Thanks, Michelle.It's a new skill. I hope I don't overuse it.So glad you liked it.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"This made me feel so American. I had to stop and look up words quite a few times but wound up laughing my ass off at this pair! Your back and forth dialogue is on point! Really hysterical story! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kay-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2708940\/thumbnail_23473e30284ff8c6cbe587d8023bb82094cce48a.jpg","author_name":"Kay Smith"},{"comment":"Kay,Thanks for your great feedback.It's like learning a new language. So glad to have made you laugh.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"These two are so delightfully crass! I almost want to go hang out with them!! (Almost\u2026 \ud83d\ude02) This was great, Chris, and so funny! I don\u2019t have the imagination to tackle the Sci-fi prompts. You do so well with them!! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/nina-h\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2721494\/thumbnail_d2311cfba60fcd1dc37e2da36b7ef2cdd0d1bc60.jpg","author_name":"Nina H"},{"comment":"Nina,Thanks so much for your great feedback.Sci-Fi is one of my big interests, but I'm still learning to write in that genre. So glad you liked it.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"I love when stories can be told through pure dialogue. And a wild one at that! Very original and a great approach to the prompt. Those aliens sure must get frustrated about us taking their spots...","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks, AnneMarie.I do enjoy writing dialogue-only pieces.So glad you liked it.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"},{"comment":"Bad sun rising.Thanks for liking my 'Kneaded Touch'.And my 'All in a name'","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Indeed.Thanks for reading it, Mary.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chris-campbell-9f4b4a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/420869\/thumbnail_88001db06e9093eceb6b782bab3207f8718f530a.jpg","author_name":"Chris Campbell"}]