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Queen Cymbeline

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Zilla Babbitt
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[{"comment":"Thank you everyone!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zilla-babbitt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/254697\/thumbnail_b2c42c7943ecf9c7d7ac761911233d8bc67a19e4.jpg","author_name":"Zilla Babbitt"},{"comment":"In the first paragraph it says the fish avoided the inlets. The live ones, anyway. She either has a hell of a throw with the net or she's catching dead fish.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/debra-caples\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/9fbd297da3c71ae9eb656b5b1016572c96816784.png","author_name":"Debra Caples"},{"comment":"Haha! Oops, I meant to say that the tide drew the fish into the inlet and trapped them there. Emphasizing that would make more sense. Thank you for your comment.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zilla-babbitt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/254697\/thumbnail_b2c42c7943ecf9c7d7ac761911233d8bc67a19e4.jpg","author_name":"Zilla Babbitt"},{"comment":"Congratulations Zilla!! And, I have a feeling Queen Cymbeline knew you had written a winning story. I was impressed with the way you ensured 10 black cats would cross Ione\u2019s path over the course of a day. Sue","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sue-m\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/76e8daf43b51c7469b266d37aab6e3ed52f679bc.png","author_name":"Sue M"},{"comment":"I loved the description, you have a way with words, but I found the plot slightly lacking. I got slightly lost after the first paragraph....I know that the prompt said cats but I would have preferred it if the story had focused on the lives of people as they relate to fishing, maybe even the lives of the fish themselves? That said, you painted wonderful imagery and ensared all my sences, in that first paragraph particularly. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rima-elboustani\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/87443\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Rima ElBoustani"},{"comment":"Very good story, especially the way you create setting. The immersion into Ione's world is second to none. And then keeps getting better with the interaction between Ione, Queen and the sea.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurentz-baker\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263476\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Laurentz Baker"},{"comment":"Very good story, especially the way you create setting. The immersion into Ione's world is second to none. And then keeps getting better with the interaction between Ione, Queen and the sea.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/roger-crane\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/834538\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Roger Crane"},{"comment":"Deserved win!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/akshat\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/612031\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Akshat ."},{"comment":"Fascinating. The world Ione seems to live in is strange in the most charming way. Particularly liked the expression "checkerboard verdant mountains". It paints a nice image for me.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/raven-t\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/bc410c3cdef579aef084ee58828626a1c40e0e19.png","author_name":"Raven T"},{"comment":"Great story. You have amazing creative potential. Well done","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/yoomi-ari\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/260253\/thumbnail_f03f5ad2b4039339853fe8944e801b7a9fc231f4.jpg","author_name":"Yoomi Ari"},{"comment":"Nice work. :) I thought I'd give this a read for the heck of it.Everything I could say concerning either critique, or highlights have already been said, so I'll leave it at one word; beautiful.Keep on writing!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/leo-greer\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/743844\/thumbnail_581b43514a2216ca25009b44ea43c603b89d84fb.jpg","author_name":"Leo Greer \ud83e\udd85 \ud83d\udd76"},{"comment":"As somewhone who lives with 7 cats, this story speaks to me on a spiritual level. I imagine this place would be hell for some but heaven for others. Here's an extrememly belated congrats xD","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rayhan-hidayat\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/590410\/thumbnail_385dd57d36b4e3b4ba38c67f2863e5ae2f6d8ffb.jpg","author_name":"Rayhan Hidayat"},{"comment":"Queen Cymbeline would be proud!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/avery-mason\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/507075\/thumbnail_f91546b14c01a7f27b54e93e0bb788f25787983f.jpg","author_name":"Avery Mason \ud83c\udf4d\ud83d\ude07\ud83e\udd29"},{"comment":"Wow! This is such a pretty story! I love how you paint her as a witch-like person in the beginning but flip her to a nice girl who lives by the sea and has a lot of cats in the end. It takes talent to do that!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/maya-ritz\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/280750\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Maya Ritz"},{"comment":"What a lovely descriptive piece. Loved it.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/barbara-eustace\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3472ff5765a2d9cb8605e9b928f61808c7010096.png","author_name":"Barbara Eustace"},{"comment":"Oh, hi! This is a wonderful story. I think I'd pay you in bubbles and cow jars to write a whole book of this, Zilla. Of course, you should have won this contest because because because and we know you will go very far. You have made us very proud as writers. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rhondalise-mitza\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/214635\/thumbnail_214730a568563afa76cb3269d8ffc297f877e395.jpg","author_name":"Rhondalise Mitza"},{"comment":"Queen Cymbeline lives a good life. Doesn't have to do a thing but sit back and eat.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tristan-carax\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/276f33cf6970c5e6d0e901826df14204875496c6.png","author_name":"Tristan Carax"},{"comment":"LOLL (laugh with tears)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chimamaka-adeniyi\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/639089\/thumbnail_4805ee3e104ae1259ce35977dc6b97e64218edeb.jpg","author_name":"Chimamaka Adeniyi\ud83d\ude45"},{"comment":"Great job Zilla!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/cholmondeley-frink\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/445309\/thumbnail_bc1ca808ebde48ae36c9c38c2059e1bb2ffabec7.jpg","author_name":"Cholmondeley Frink"},{"comment":"congrats Zilla the story is amazing and has a lot of good words.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/advit-chugh\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/b1fb3bec6fdb22e19a94fe4c6c4481ccba2ee9f0.png","author_name":"Advit Chugh"},{"comment":"i find myself wanting to know more about Ione . Very nice descriptions, I was able to picture fish and mountains.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sharron-lajean\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/271273\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Sharron LaJean"},{"comment":"i find myself wanting to know more about Ione . Very nice descriptions, I was able to picture fish and mountains.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/elliott-currie-wilde\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/625637\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Elliott Currie Wilde"}]