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[{"comment":"I love the complete normalcy of the opening paragraphs. Sure, a superhero scholarship. But what's great is that Dr. Albright is partly correct... and is still a villain because he is one sided and only speaks of the bad. Detailed, layered. Deserved win!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zilla-babbitt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/254697\/thumbnail_b2c42c7943ecf9c7d7ac761911233d8bc67a19e4.jpg","author_name":"Zilla Babbitt"},{"comment":"Thanks, Zilla!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"You're so welcome! This is one of the stories I've come back to read because it's just hard for me to understand the meaning and message-- this has so many layers and meaningful pushes. Well done!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zilla-babbitt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/254697\/thumbnail_b2c42c7943ecf9c7d7ac761911233d8bc67a19e4.jpg","author_name":"Zilla Babbitt"},{"comment":"Congratulations on your win Jeff!What a unique way to tell a story of the superpowers we've all heard of before. Also, what a reality check! We often think of having superpowers as a win-win situation but you've balanced that out for us. I wonder what's the downside to Dr. Albright's power. I think I see a bit of it in the way he seemed egotistical in the end. I do now believe that a power like his is necessary and useful in such cases, but I'd hope it wouldn't eventually get the best of him. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lisa-e-hamilton-ms-cheevious\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/585602\/thumbnail_dad19630ed851a3a5e9ba79bf6aa7ef92413c38d.jpg","author_name":"Lisa E. Hamilton (Ms.Cheevious)"},{"comment":"Thanks, Ms C. A side-story about the drawbacks of his power is a neat idea. He's certainly no fun at parties.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"That last sentence is absolutely one of the most poignant and satisfying ending sentences ever. Congratulations on your win! This is a stellar concept and you absolutely deserve the win!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/eva-csaki\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/5b2fbd0d968f4666937afc1686c0535f96c71f49.png","author_name":"Eva Csaki"},{"comment":"Thanks, Eva!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Thanks, Eva!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/neomi-shah\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/517205\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Neomi Shah"},{"comment":"Thanks Neomi!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Oh, cool! I love how in the end, doctor Albright is making more villains than heroes by not actually giving them training! The prompt simply said "superpower" but you took this to a whole other level! You deserve a thousand followers, just because of this. Now you have one more, at least! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emmie-greensgate\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/820644\/thumbnail_070d41521ba1381a32c06e89b9f05e100edfdc24.jpg","author_name":"Emmie Greensgate \ud83c\udfd7\ud83d\udd1a\ud83d\udd1a\ud83d\udc6b"},{"comment":"Thanks, Emmie!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"I like the sort of semi-superhero genre, where characters have superpowers but they aren't really superheroes. This kind of fits that genre, and you can hardly find anything that does, these days. Really good! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emmie-greensgate\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/820644\/thumbnail_070d41521ba1381a32c06e89b9f05e100edfdc24.jpg","author_name":"Emmie Greensgate \ud83c\udfd7\ud83d\udd1a\ud83d\udd1a\ud83d\udc6b"},{"comment":"I loved reading this story! I wanted to go on and on with Dr. Albright's appointments, but sadly, as always, all stories must end. The ending was really mysterious!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/akshat\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/612031\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Akshat ."},{"comment":"Thanks Akshat, I'm glad you enjoyed it!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"I thought the story was interesting since the very beginning but the last line really shook me. I sided with Dr. Albright and his observations at first but the last li e changed everything. Totally deserved win! \ud83d\udc4c\ud83d\udc4c","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/grace-kejo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/413635\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Grace Kejo"},{"comment":"Thanks Grace!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Enthralling, descriptive, in the moment prose! What a unique twist on the theme. Loved the brevity. You didn't overstate one detail. Everything was just in the right place in this story. Well done. Well deserved win. I look forward to reading more. You are an excellent story teller! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-kinley\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/442039\/thumbnail_709dbfa925f6da7156f837b8902405ce226579ad.jpg","author_name":"Karen Kinley"},{"comment":"Thanks Karen! I can post a link to some short stories or my superhero novel, if you're looking forward to more. Thanks again!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Would love to read more!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-kinley\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/442039\/thumbnail_709dbfa925f6da7156f837b8902405ce226579ad.jpg","author_name":"Karen Kinley"},{"comment":"Thanks Karen, that's awesome! You can buy it here: Amzn.com\/B07BZHZ86Por sample it here: http:\/\/eepurl.com\/gcRTgnMuch appreciated!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"I love the plot twist at the end!! So unexpected. Great job!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sierra-butler\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/470178\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Sierra Butler"},{"comment":"Thanks Sierra!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"This was so great! A well deserved win, I love how we don't really know Albright's intentions until the last sentence","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsey-w\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/ba70e185ad5f8bd89713de0ae0734e59d08b9ad3.png","author_name":"Lindsey W"},{"comment":"Thanks Lindsay!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"I really liked this story, Jeff! It reminds me of the Umbrella Academy. Have you ever watched it? It's on Netflix. Would you mind coming and checking out my page? I would appreciate any feedback you may have. Thanks!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/megan-sutherland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/524598\/thumbnail_4ac6dc8fa3df841cd5e0d9edb8bc108783c4b7ef.jpg","author_name":"Megan Sutherland"},{"comment":"Great story. Good character shaping of dr. Warren Albright. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/keerththan\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/597288\/thumbnail_e85cb74d5e0cdc708c2a54a4d541fdee3600b607.jpg","author_name":"Keerththan \ud83d\ude00"},{"comment":"Thanks!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Congrats! On your win and a great story. Keep up the good work.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tina-laing\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/398421\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Tina Laing"},{"comment":"Thanks!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Thanks!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jonathan-blaauw\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/418676\/thumbnail_5fcb9fc4ee5b87ff8bf43277f9de1aa906a0e002.jpg","author_name":"Jonathan Blaauw"},{"comment":"Thanks Jonathan,There is a nod to the X-Men with the name of the school. Reality and gravity are indeed harsh mistresses.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Very well-written. You have a talent for characterization. The way Dr. Albright's character develops throughout the story to reach the climax is amazing. Really glad to have read your work.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shivani-manocha\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/603711\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Shivani Manocha"},{"comment":"Thank you, Shivani!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"I absolutely love the twist ending! Expertly constructed, impeccable word choices. Congrats on the win!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/delano-mighty\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/593655\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Delano Mighty"},{"comment":"nice title, it was very effective c:","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/spider-baby\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576720\/thumbnail_26098399d64efb5857a6d7ade9a9be5cabe0c77d.jpg","author_name":"Spider Baby"},{"comment":"Thanks Spider Baby!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"This Story! So amazing, and I can't wait for more of your stories :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jewels\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/470919\/thumbnail_24a6d49f234cbdbb40bb1fadbd8e3b798401cc17.jpg","author_name":"Jewels \ud83c\udf0a\ud83d\udc05"},{"comment":"Thanks Juliette. I can post a link to my superhero novel, if you can't wait for more.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Thanks! I love superheros, Video games, etc.Also, If you could be so kind and go read my first story, "Our Treehouse" that would be great!Thanks :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jewels\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/470919\/thumbnail_24a6d49f234cbdbb40bb1fadbd8e3b798401cc17.jpg","author_name":"Jewels \ud83c\udf0a\ud83d\udc05"},{"comment":"Faultless....you have superhero abilities with words. The ending was superb!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/p-jean\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/466414\/thumbnail_776bb97597bf90c5bb34418683f140e72f88fef4.jpg","author_name":"P. Jean"},{"comment":"Thanks P.Jean !","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"},{"comment":"Excellent story, so creative! Congratulations!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caryn-k\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/449143\/thumbnail_15e6a0bbb0e76b95d1adc2c689cdc0fcfe55d861.jpg","author_name":"Caryn K"},{"comment":"Thanks Caryn!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jeff-c-carter\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/576910\/thumbnail_28648407ac6073a8281c9063ea4e6c4965c308cf.jpg","author_name":"Jeff C. Carter"}]