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[{"comment":"I got feelings like Hunger Games or Brave New World. Dystopia posing as a utopia is always interesting if it\u2019s done right. The ideals of the society you created and the way they are enforced feel like a cult. Well done.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/graham-kinross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1059323\/thumbnail_d8a561ae4f9e2149ed65fca594f26a5c6ed7610f.jpg","author_name":"Graham Kinross"},{"comment":"Thank you for reading and for your comment! I was hoping to achieve a feeling of oppression similar to the Hunger Games or 1984. I haven't read Brave New World but it's on my list. Thanks again for the feedback.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/leigh-johnson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/e3dd1a0471d29cf15dc3b8dff3bd12e624c6b440.png","author_name":"Leigh Johnson"},{"comment":"You\u2019re welcome.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/graham-kinross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1059323\/thumbnail_d8a561ae4f9e2149ed65fca594f26a5c6ed7610f.jpg","author_name":"Graham Kinross"},{"comment":"This is an excellent idea for a novella. The dystopian themes tied with religious fervor brings about a very grim yet suspenseful scenario. I think you should consider expanding this into a larger story. Many great books start off as short stories.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/branson-kennedy\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/3031036\/thumbnail_2521e2e7f71b53be32833350080a0b99d12f3ac6.jpg","author_name":"Branson Kennedy"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for your feedback. Glad you also felt the grimness that I felt while writing it. I think it would be interesting to see other characters' responses to this world and a novella would definitely allow me to do that. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/leigh-johnson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/e3dd1a0471d29cf15dc3b8dff3bd12e624c6b440.png","author_name":"Leigh Johnson"},{"comment":"Fine work. Congrats.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Thank you very much. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/leigh-johnson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/e3dd1a0471d29cf15dc3b8dff3bd12e624c6b440.png","author_name":"Leigh Johnson"},{"comment":"U are welcome.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Such a scary and bleak world, and you've drawn it so well.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kathryn-kahn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2171044\/thumbnail_8a10792c528877bd06b9334c79a79a8275cf56d9.jpg","author_name":"Kathryn Kahn"},{"comment":"Thank you so much. I took a lot of inspiration from \u20181984\u2019 which I found extremely bleak and anxiety-inducing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/leigh-johnson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/e3dd1a0471d29cf15dc3b8dff3bd12e624c6b440.png","author_name":"Leigh Johnson"}]