Chấn Động! Thiên Kim Toàn Năng Thu Nạp Đàn Em Trong Show Truyền Hình
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Mihnea Balan
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[{"comment":"You sre good and that is readon am reading you after two submissions only. Fine work. Congrats.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"So much to love about this piece, but I have to play Captain Actually. The period of a pendulum is based only on the length of the string, so no matter how hard it is flung, the tempo of a Newton\u2019s cradle can\u2019t change. That image is so important to the story that it can\u2019t be factually wrong. The intensity of the noise can increase, the speed of the ball\u2019s swing can increase, but it will come back and hit the ball beside it at the same tempo. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anne-shillingsburg\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2555965\/thumbnail_0555e072c0fdd60c25bdfd886245423b4cab9911.jpg","author_name":"Anne Shillingsburg"},{"comment":"Hello Anne. Thank you so much for the information! Believe it or not, I used to study Physics a while ago. Guess it's due to moments like these that I've decided to change my major to Anthropology :) That doesn't mean to say that Physics isn't fascinating, I just have a hard time remembering certain concepts. Anyway, now I'll remember that the tempo of a Newton's cradle can't change so I appreciate your comment. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mihnea-balan\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/6e979f426b676955f4896002085eb834b93326b1.png","author_name":"Mihnea Balan"},{"comment":"Excellent piece. Amazing how you played with the two characters. Well done, and congrats!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/john-siddham\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2469917\/thumbnail_7f0f423c10dbe91d190343458d961d6c6728b9e7.jpg","author_name":"John Siddham"},{"comment":"Amazing! Shortlisted on your second submission. Good for you. \ud83d\udc4f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/viga-boland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/6fdede7befa5cbf3bc6641cf4e8ae6b2ab7a6811.png","author_name":"Viga Boland"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words! I just began reading your stories and became enthralled by HOPSCOTCH. What a bittersweet story! Anyway, thank you for taking the time to leave a comment, it made my day and gave me a lot of much needed hope. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mihnea-balan\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/6e979f426b676955f4896002085eb834b93326b1.png","author_name":"Mihnea Balan"},{"comment":"Enjoy the ride Mihnea!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/viga-boland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/6fdede7befa5cbf3bc6641cf4e8ae6b2ab7a6811.png","author_name":"Viga Boland"},{"comment":"I love this story\u2019s it is the best thing that i read as a short story ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/r-h-ab93fe\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2687737\/thumbnail_81f9dc45e131e35d02e1cbaec1a32200f082ab86.jpg","author_name":"R H"},{"comment":"I love this story\u2019s it is the best thing that i read as a short story ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amanda-lieser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/cf681cfbf3c282528fea28596536f592630842e7.png","author_name":"Amanda Lieser"}]