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Pagliacci on the Q Train

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Emily Hemmings
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[{"comment":"Wow, what a profile of a person. I loved the parallels and differences between the daughter and the mother. It made their persons stronger by the contrast and similarities. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kara-o\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/263076\/thumbnail_495fb2117c9927ae25641342c82536f2c734002f.jpg","author_name":"Kara O"},{"comment":"Wonderful job. Congratulations on the win. I would have written those two sentences with exclamation points normally, but your story commands a certain beautiful flatness and exclamation points feel like a betrayal.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/matthew-cunnane\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/dc8d73b2300ecd72072137237d2c68dc0d3a7981.png","author_name":"Matthew Cunnane"},{"comment":"Your strong characterizations and illuminating glimpses into individual lives immersed me in your story. This is especially impressive, because of the word count limitations. You have a gift for conveying details in fewer words. Congratulations!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/k-sargent\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/75e734d05411fbc60cd6f0ae8f070914564202bd.png","author_name":"K. Sargent"},{"comment":"that was exquisite! i got more than what i expected. the story kept getting better with each word i read. a much deserved win for pure talent. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lark-nichols\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/530dea69f55c0fe61ae6e24c501e8cb4e66967f7.png","author_name":"Lark Nichols"},{"comment":"I love this story. It is evident that you are a Real Writer. If I were competent at navigating this website I would look up your profile and see what books you have written.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-c-fb608e\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/276506\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Helen C"},{"comment":"Hi, Helen! First of all, thank you for the kind words. If it helps, I am not sure how to navigate this website either, but I do in fact do other writing and I am looking into having some of my stories put into an ebook format. :) Thanks for reading.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-hemmings\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/305111\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Emily Hemmings"},{"comment":"Hi Helen and Emily! If you have the time, it would be great to hear your feedback on how we could make this site more easy for you to navigate. You can send over any issues or feedback to [email protected] \u2014 we're always looking for ways to improve! :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/arielle-reedsy\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/62a3ad0fef668c4e2a220f6982de94942fbf1d1e.png","author_name":"Arielle - Reedsy"},{"comment":"Great characterisation and nice story!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/martin-ward\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/224245\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Martin Ward"},{"comment":"Well, I loved it. A great portrait of a broken mother and daughter. So refreshing and honest and void of pretension. Hands down one of the top 5 pieces I've read on this platform. Well done and Congrats on the win!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sarah-paris\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/7707f6812879867a3c219186b9129575ea2ab581.png","author_name":"Sarah Paris"},{"comment":"This story definitely deserved the prize, it was excellently written.Every single paragraph left me in awe looking forward to what would happen next. Congratulations.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/klyn-akwarandu\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/452476\/thumbnail_cbea8eb48b23b48929489aaa909c458ee3ceb644.jpg","author_name":"Klyn Akwarandu"},{"comment":"The title is my favorite part. It's funny and intriguing and snapshots the whole quirky story in five words. But it pales in comparison to the majestic quirkiness of the real story. Deserved win!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zilla-babbitt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/254697\/thumbnail_b2c42c7943ecf9c7d7ac761911233d8bc67a19e4.jpg","author_name":"Zilla Babbitt"},{"comment":"Congratulations \ud83c\udf8a\ud83c\udf89","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/christian-garduno\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Christian Garduno"},{"comment":"Poignant and well written. Congratulations","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/morgan-elbert\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/453203\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Morgan Elbert"},{"comment":"Truly well done. Congratulations!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jamie-shaw\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/95f92b2f0cb530542d16d90a6c2af59e20759430.png","author_name":"Jamie Shaw"},{"comment":"Wonderful story. Congratulations ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/eunice-ndoh\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/289942\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Eunice Ndoh"},{"comment":"Superb story, congratulations!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/elinor-c-nerenberg\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/5b2fbd0d968f4666937afc1686c0535f96c71f49.png","author_name":"Elinor C. Nerenberg"},{"comment":"Well done, captured me at the beginning. Well deserved and congrats!\ud83d\udc4f\ud83c\udffb","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/yoomi-ari\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/260253\/thumbnail_f03f5ad2b4039339853fe8944e801b7a9fc231f4.jpg","author_name":"Yoomi Ari"},{"comment":"Great characterizations and imagery to set the scene. I could feel like I was there!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chad-lehrmann\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/298608\/thumbnail_4318afb5382fc152e33dacc5e78583c291ca65e3.jpg","author_name":"Chad Lehrmann"},{"comment":"Congratulations!! Nicely done :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/allie-pittman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/bc5af774c819dc8b91c6b244583727dac105439a.png","author_name":"Allie Pittman"},{"comment":"Very insightful writing, and paints such a vivid picture, well done on your win.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/pamela-saunders\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/451542\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Pamela Saunders"},{"comment":"Cute, sad story. Great job on your win.\ud83d\ude01","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/waverley-stark\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/234755\/thumbnail_2b0fac00297430443676ff131736a285e0a29c01.jpg","author_name":"Waverley Stark"},{"comment":"A very moving and realistic rendering of how holidays affect us our whole lives. I have some of your feelings about New Year's Eve and I gave up trying to have a "Happy New Year" kind of night a long time ago. Now I will remember your story every New Year. Excellent writing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/margie-ricca\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/282726\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Margie Ricca"}]