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On the Shore of Styx

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Zachariah Chamberlin
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[{"comment":"Interesting take on the story, although I didn't get a real sense WHY Phineas was chosen (maybe that is a tale for another time), but I didn't understand what was so special about him or if this was more of a random process. If so, what is the random process? Also, I felt you were TELLING more than SHOWING in this story, especially the beginning. Still, I really enjoyed the story and think it has a potential to be a part of a larger narrative. Thanks for sharing!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/david-sweet\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1576431\/thumbnail_5044f007243075ee96149f0835caf91aaf8695c8.jpg","author_name":"David Sweet"},{"comment":"Thank you for the feedback, sir. This was a spontaneous act, and I'll apply some edits later. You are correct that there is a larger narrative at work here. This story was a short prequel to my novel "We Come Bearing Curses." Just wanted to toy with an idea and see how it hit the readers. I really appreciate your feedback! I'm still new at writing, and this helps me improve. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zachariah-chamberlin\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2719643\/thumbnail_b745375ac1237322d1416263f36225c4ad5d2ce2.jpg","author_name":"Zachariah Chamberlin"},{"comment":"Great! Keep it up. It was intriguing. I was also wondering about why you chose Gehenna (actual Hell) over Hades (Greek place of the Dead) for the story. I would be interested in reading more. Thanks for sharing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/david-sweet\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1576431\/thumbnail_5044f007243075ee96149f0835caf91aaf8695c8.jpg","author_name":"David Sweet"},{"comment":"Great! Keep it up. It was intriguing. I was also wondering about why you chose Gehenna (actual Hell) over Hades (Greek place of the Dead) for the story. I would be interested in reading more. Thanks for sharing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zachariah-chamberlin\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2719643\/thumbnail_b745375ac1237322d1416263f36225c4ad5d2ce2.jpg","author_name":"Zachariah Chamberlin"},{"comment":"I knew Gehenna was an actual place just outside of Jerusalem. I thought it was interesting that you used it. I also caught the Enoch reference. I think it's cool that you are mixing and matching the cultures.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/david-sweet\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1576431\/thumbnail_5044f007243075ee96149f0835caf91aaf8695c8.jpg","author_name":"David Sweet"},{"comment":"I really want to make my work inclusive and equitable, something that Lovecraft lacked in his writing. Much of this series will be inspired by his work.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zachariah-chamberlin\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2719643\/thumbnail_b745375ac1237322d1416263f36225c4ad5d2ce2.jpg","author_name":"Zachariah Chamberlin"}]