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Never Follow the Lights

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Caroline Tuohy
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[{"comment":"Hi Caroline!Cool 2nd person POV, present tense; unusual. Good description, especially on the intro describing Deidre from Accounting. Huh another Nullabour Plain reference - Chris just wrote a story about that, how weird."She taps the bar with her beefy hands-" nice imagery.Huh, poetry? Cool! I think that really adds to the idea of being by a fire.I liked the ending - reminds us that there's something holy and magical and dangerous about the night sky. Really cool, good tone, interesting narrator ...R","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/russell-mickler\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2151256\/thumbnail_29e2d107f77cd33d6d938773885107435872ec43.jpg","author_name":"Russell Mickler"},{"comment":"Hi Caroline!Cool 2nd person POV, present tense; unusual. Good description, especially on the intro describing Deidre from Accounting. Huh another Nullabour Plain reference - Chris just wrote a story about that, how weird."She taps the bar with her beefy hands-" nice imagery.Huh, poetry? Cool! I think that really adds to the idea of being by a fire.I liked the ending - reminds us that there's something holy and magical and dangerous about the night sky. Really cool, good tone, interesting narrator ...R","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-tuohy\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2637554\/thumbnail_7389e429d99ac6f2bd2c8d2243c472a0ef8f7f14.jpg","author_name":"Caroline Tuohy"},{"comment":"Hey, your work was great - unusual and distinctive - 2nd person is often considered a risk in writing contests so it's not something you see all the time :)Myself, I think you played it well in this piece. Hope to see more of your stuff around here in the weeks ahead!R ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/russell-mickler\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2151256\/thumbnail_29e2d107f77cd33d6d938773885107435872ec43.jpg","author_name":"Russell Mickler"},{"comment":"Hey, your work was great - unusual and distinctive - 2nd person is often considered a risk in writing contests so it's not something you see all the time :)Myself, I think you played it well in this piece. Hope to see more of your stuff around here in the weeks ahead!R ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-logue\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2666602\/thumbnail_4d93692a133d5538f69c328d8b1e9e5006ffd2b6.jpg","author_name":"Kevin Logue"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for your review. I can definitely see from a reader perspective I may have wasted the pub scene as a narrative tool. You\u2019ve made a really good observation here.Otherwise, I\u2019m really grateful you took the time to let me know what you think of my writing. And I\u2019m really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-tuohy\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2637554\/thumbnail_7389e429d99ac6f2bd2c8d2243c472a0ef8f7f14.jpg","author_name":"Caroline Tuohy"},{"comment":"This story is based around the Min Min lights. Find out more about them here: https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Min_Min_light","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-tuohy\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2637554\/thumbnail_7389e429d99ac6f2bd2c8d2243c472a0ef8f7f14.jpg","author_name":"Caroline Tuohy"},{"comment":"Even cooler!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/russell-mickler\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2151256\/thumbnail_29e2d107f77cd33d6d938773885107435872ec43.jpg","author_name":"Russell Mickler"}]