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[{"comment":"Dear ReedsyWhen I took the road to creative writing in a non-native language, it was purely out of my love for the art. I never thought my work would receive the kind of love I experienced on this site. Thank you so much for just being there!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"CONGRATS on the win, Suma! So glad to see your work receive the recognition it deserves! (and you know how much I love me a good romance story)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/j-c-lovero\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/308690\/thumbnail_de03a326766475843e32349416cd4f0ef0248313.jpg","author_name":"J.C. Lovero"},{"comment":"Hey J.C.So good to hear you cheering me on! Thank you for all the encouragement along my journey.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"The partition of India in 1947 led to one of the bloodiest exoduses in human history. This story is based on a news clipping about two young lives drawn into the vortex. This is a creative interpretation and has been kept short. I did not add too many details as I wanted to be respectful. This is a heartfelt tribute to Yasmin and Raj.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Suma! This was so beautiful and poetic. I loved so many of the lines, but I think this was my favorite \u2014\u201cAfter this turn, you will not be able to see the speck that I have become now.\u201dThat image was so powerful amid the narrative of \u201cill-timed\u201d love Well done! \ud83d\udc4f\ud83d\udc4f\ud83d\udc4f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-p-simmons\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1646675\/thumbnail_b941452e22eee11d7cc51522ec5768dcc9c34dd0.jpg","author_name":"Hannah P. Simmons"},{"comment":"Hannah,Thank you so much. I wasn't very sure about posting this story as it is very short. But I'm so happy it is receiving so much love\ud83d\ude0a Thank you for your kind words.\u2764\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Don\u2019t ever be nervous because of length, you don\u2019t need a lot of words to tell a beautiful story! You did an amazing job \ud83d\ude0a\u2764\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-p-simmons\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1646675\/thumbnail_b941452e22eee11d7cc51522ec5768dcc9c34dd0.jpg","author_name":"Hannah P. Simmons"},{"comment":"Aww thank you!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Hi Suma, this was wonderfully beautiful and amazing. You did a great job writing this and I thought it worked with the prompt perfectly. It was time well spent, and I loved it!! :) ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/daniel-r-hayes\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/871038\/thumbnail_12d7bb3ce9ad28f83ca790827e8e7cf4f20144b6.jpg","author_name":"Daniel R. Hayes"},{"comment":"Hi Daniel,Thank you so much for your generous appreciation. I'm glad you loved reading it and took time to comment on it. Thank you!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Great read and so poetic ! Terrace rendezvous are a part of culture.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/om-bagal\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/29a6de2fd8618f31afb281a608c57995b7eb105d.png","author_name":"Om Bagal"},{"comment":"Thank you! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Suma you have captured the horrors of separation so well and made me empathize. Great story and worthy winner.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shahzad-ahmad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/863618\/thumbnail_640101dcb506655d285046c0a88ed89852416419.jpg","author_name":"Shahzad Ahmad"},{"comment":"Thank you for your kind words. Sorry for the late reply. I have not logged into Reedsy for sometime. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Thank you for your appreciation.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shahzad-ahmad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/863618\/thumbnail_640101dcb506655d285046c0a88ed89852416419.jpg","author_name":"Shahzad Ahmad"},{"comment":"The Partition ruined us all!You encapsulate the heartache that many lovers probably felt at that time - it was a good read. 'With a volcano in my chest where my heart used to be.' - love this line - the anger felt by millions in one sentence, well done. Kudos for writing in your 2nd language so eloquently - most struggle to write in their mother tongues.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/aj-ullah\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2392215\/thumbnail_df3303e83d7d14e9a032022e450908ac6fd03047.jpg","author_name":"AJ Ullah"},{"comment":"Yes, it did. But I would like to believe that the younger generation can see through the blunders of the past and work towards a better tomorrow.Thank you so much for taking time to read and leave such a generous comment!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"It's the hope that hurts the most - yes, I do believe the younger generation want to move forward - however, I don't think the politicians want to. Anyway, without getting too deep - I look forward to reading some of your other stories :) ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/aj-ullah\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2392215\/thumbnail_df3303e83d7d14e9a032022e450908ac6fd03047.jpg","author_name":"AJ Ullah"},{"comment":"Wow, great story. I was drawn in.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/j-h-ad9ff5\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/56594b38808d9c32652dc3b65e7cd14ed265277e.png","author_name":"J H"},{"comment":"Thank you for your appreciation.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"It's fantastic, I think this story couldn't have been written any better.\ud83d\udc4f\ud83d\udda4So much love from Lahore.\ud83e\udd40","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hassan-akram\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2355747\/thumbnail_5f4553c1ff21766fb1949345f699b65c8ad39112.jpg","author_name":"Hassan Akram"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a heartfelt comment.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"pls answer me i need a for who are you what birth are you because i have a project book review i need to know more about you in your bio is not that much to know you pls help me reply ASAP","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tristan-john-c-mendoza\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2321899\/thumbnail_94bade1f0a6e0aa53c1f15fad6f8bf5400a49079.jpg","author_name":"Tristan John C. Mendoza"},{"comment":"nice work anyway, INTRODUCTION OF MYSELF to the reedsy community: hello everyone my name is tom and im new to the reedsy community id appreciate a like on my story if you think it is fantastic. I am a brand new writer and very concerned people may not be liking my story because they think my work is plagarized since I am a first time writer but write like a professional. I swear hand to bible that this is my real work. thank you. happy writing and cheers from the northeast","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tom-ortega\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2255511\/thumbnail_da99c262b6077a2197a26e3272ca36e39894de1b.jpg","author_name":"Tom Ortega"},{"comment":"This was an amazing tale-- A pleasant recollection of 2001 (release) movie- "Gadar: Ek Prem Katha"; and of course, so beautifully expressed was this(too) partition based love story that really deserved an acclamation \ud83d\udc4d","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/priceless-passion\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1354601\/thumbnail_487bf3a8255278bb5e004b58e8093fb3eb0619a1.jpg","author_name":"Priceless Passion"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for your kind words!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"What a heartbreakingly beautiful story. I loved how each of the lovers reacted to the same event. The man, who must undertake the journey, remains steadfast and the woman who stays behind moves forward with this new reality of their lives. Your prose is moving and I look forward to reading your other stories.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/wally-schmidt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2197990\/thumbnail_25078a88fc6eac69aeb4facbfbd2f9032f93426f.jpg","author_name":"Wally Schmidt"},{"comment":"Thank you so much Wally. I appreciate you taking time to read and appreciate the story.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"This short story is AWESOME! I LOVE IT!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/yuvraj-dev\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2219485\/thumbnail_e52b4bfbd17431856b07cac1fa57f2a2d790905a.jpg","author_name":"Yuvraj Dev"},{"comment":"Thank you!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Hey, I liked your writing very much. This is the first short story I read of yours, and I am hooked. I am now eager to read all of your stories. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/san-r\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2186854\/thumbnail_474657d81151c1af00cc1e5a42dcdb4e0f633443.jpg","author_name":"San R"},{"comment":"Thank you for your kind words. Welcome to Reedsy!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Where this happen storyChaacter and their roles in the story","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/bianca-cosip\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2133391\/thumbnail_56282d6572b10ab9f7848c47036cc0e96a6a51bb.jpg","author_name":"Bianca Cosip"},{"comment":"SUMA!! I am so late to congratulate you, but \ud83d\udc4f\ud83d\udc4f\ud83d\udc4f this was a beautiful story, and you deserve to have your writing highlighted. \u2764\ufe0f\u2764\ufe0f\u2764\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-p-simmons\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1646675\/thumbnail_b941452e22eee11d7cc51522ec5768dcc9c34dd0.jpg","author_name":"Hannah P. Simmons"},{"comment":"Thank you so much, Hannah\u2764\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"I read this a week back, wanted to comment but my toddler distracted me( as usual) and see I'm back which shows this stayed with me. Ordinary people from both sides of the border bear the trans-generational trauma of partition, but despite the madness, love will always triumph! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/salmah-ahmed\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/690187\/thumbnail_13562a175f9aa0ad0b6f76014c74526dbda7c250.jpg","author_name":"Salmah Ahmed"},{"comment":"Thank you! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"This is truly beautiful. I'm very moved. Thank you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/becky-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2059391\/thumbnail_4f5e513761eb1a0787207aad121355b044b8b050.jpg","author_name":"Becky B"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for your kind words.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for your kind words.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/graham-kinross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1059323\/thumbnail_d8a561ae4f9e2149ed65fca594f26a5c6ed7610f.jpg","author_name":"Graham Kinross"},{"comment":"Thank you for your kind words.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/suma-jayachandar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1057101\/thumbnail_742592930bafec0f3ae1113740395a9f1c2a662b.jpg","author_name":"Suma Jayachandar"}]