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Meet Me At The River

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Lindsay Flo
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[{"comment":"Beautiful writing that captures the infatuation of teenage friendships so well.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/m-a-grace\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2951204\/thumbnail_f88d2bca8fbc4cbd08f0c2f4fdc2fdd5b64ec71a.jpg","author_name":"M.A. Grace"},{"comment":"There are some beautiful phrases in this. And after reading it and enjoying it, I went back to the beginning ... "And when we\u2019re dead, meet me at the river, Jade said. Promise."When "we're" dead, not when "one of us" is dead or when "I'm" dead. You hid the clue in plain sight and I missed it. Well done. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sharon-honeycutt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/66fd9f95a8bec4b3a5a704d1b4d0927a3138cffc.png","author_name":"Sharon Honeycutt"},{"comment":"Same! Great catch!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kay-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2708940\/thumbnail_23473e30284ff8c6cbe587d8023bb82094cce48a.jpg","author_name":"Kay Smith"},{"comment":":)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sharon-honeycutt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/66fd9f95a8bec4b3a5a704d1b4d0927a3138cffc.png","author_name":"Sharon Honeycutt"},{"comment":"That desire for connection and friendship is so palpable throughout the story. I love the way you structure sentences. It reminds me of a lot of great writing from the 70's when there wasn't as much detachment and there was a comfort in the stakes being higher. Well done.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/315b39a0fc19fb45d146c17b813d46c7acb0b872.png","author_name":"Kevin B"},{"comment":"Congrats.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Congratulations \ud83c\udf89\ud83c\udf89\ud83c\udf89 and happy Friday to you! Hope you're celebrating tonight, Lindsay!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thank you!!! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"},{"comment":"Thank you!!! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks so much Rebecca!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"},{"comment":"An emotional and wonderful story. My favorite so far, bravo! \ud83d\udc4f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/miriam-esessien-6eec21\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1352193\/thumbnail_6d59592f0096e9b037f4f3b4ae67ba5bda7d9638.jpg","author_name":"Miriam Esessien"},{"comment":"This was such a beautiful story and so well written.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hazel-ide\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2629606\/thumbnail_57d6cf0e51a90976b8c012b64f5f0b8b404c2366.jpg","author_name":"Hazel Ide"},{"comment":"Beautifully written, I love the imagery!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/vicki-lynne-ferris\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/11d995d5f71245b166a93be07bdc2415c55379d5.png","author_name":"Vicki Lynne Ferris"},{"comment":"I am literally in tears. My best friend of 30 years is dying, of terminal lung cancer... and the girl you just described, the friendship you just described... perfect. I love this writing! I have no suggestions. It speaks so loudly and clearly about how friendship transcends - everything. We were introduced as a temptation at teenage experimentation but I never realized that from the moment I saw her, she would be the love of my life. I'm in love with my husband but she is my soulmate. Beautifully done! Bravo!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kay-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2708940\/thumbnail_23473e30284ff8c6cbe587d8023bb82094cce48a.jpg","author_name":"Kay Smith"},{"comment":"Oh wow. Thank you for sharing that. I'm so sorry, but what a beautiful friend she sounds like. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"},{"comment":"Lovely! This actually felt quite ominous to me, as though Jade planned for her soulmate to die with her (or close enough to her time of death). In many ways, the memories of those we grieve - especially those who sadly take their own lives - can push us into living two lives, one for ourselves and a half-life for those who have passed. I could be wrong of course (and like Brooke, I would love to know how she died as well), but I really enjoyed this regardless.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/aditi-kumar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/657808\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Aditi Kumar"},{"comment":"Sometimes the 3000 word limit adds a challenge...I would like to know how Brooke died too lol","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"},{"comment":"I had a friend like this once. I Hope everyone did. Such beautiful writing!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anne-shillingsburg\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2555965\/thumbnail_0555e072c0fdd60c25bdfd886245423b4cab9911.jpg","author_name":"Anne Shillingsburg"},{"comment":"Speculative, indeed. A soulmate tale of friendship before and beyond...This was so touching. Glad to see it on shortlist. Congrats! \ud83e\udd73","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":":)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"},{"comment":"Oh gosh this is great Lindsay. Totally got carried away by it and didn't see the end coming so bravo on that.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/derrick-m-domican\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2566755\/thumbnail_983972abc17d60193ea1febb8b982ac456426162.jpg","author_name":"Derrick M Domican"},{"comment":"Thank you!!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"},{"comment":"Beautiful as always, Lindsay. Such intricate and rich details throughout, especially around the friendship. It felt very real. Every time I read your work I have to check for that nonfiction tag \ud83d\ude05 Glad the two were reunited. Seems to me they really were soulmates! This life may have separated, sent them on a different path, but I'm sure the next one, they'll stick together forever. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks annmarie! I haven't been submitting much lately but this contest has quite a few intriguing prompts! :) ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"}]