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How to Cook Pasta

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Caroline Greaser
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"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shea-west\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/690648\/thumbnail_479e8597bde8e42918a72d17abf6b3615feee1b0.jpg","author_name":"Shea West","comment":"I think the mundane can sound extraordinary when it's written well. You certainly achieved that. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/nessa-snow\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1173789\/thumbnail_9e2309758463fa8338562f796a25b1a6c6283e32.jpg","author_name":"Nessa Snow","comment":"''he'd rather die than clean the toilet'' and then that end. super good, loved it."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Thanks!!! Ending lines are my fav thing to write lol. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/nainika-gupta\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/796183\/thumbnail_fbfca2e89b87dcc263ae50bf8f2d5578ecef33c5.jpg","author_name":"Nainika Gupta","comment":"Wow! Well deserved win, congrats!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Thanks so much!!! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/nainika-gupta\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/796183\/thumbnail_fbfca2e89b87dcc263ae50bf8f2d5578ecef33c5.jpg","author_name":"Nainika Gupta","comment":"of course!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/craig-stokes\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1066401\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Craig Stokes","comment":"I loved how the narrative takes place only in the time it takes for the pasta to boil. You were able to keep me in suspense just the perfect amount of time before you let me in on what was going on. Bravo. Great story and a deserved win. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Omg thanks so much!!!!!! Glad I was able to hold you in suspense for the duration of the boil!!! Thanks for commenting and reading!!!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rayhan-hidayat\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/590410\/thumbnail_385dd57d36b4e3b4ba38c67f2863e5ae2f6d8ffb.jpg","author_name":"Rayhan Hidayat","comment":"Omg thanks so much!!!!!! Glad I was able to hold you in suspense for the duration of the boil!!! Thanks for commenting and reading!!!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Ooh now I wanna try to make some Alfredo, sounds interesting! Thanks for the comment! I do like to try and leave my stories up to the interpretation of the reader because then it means something a little different to everyone who reads it, and I think that\u2019s pretty cool. Thanks for reading!! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rayhan-hidayat\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/590410\/thumbnail_385dd57d36b4e3b4ba38c67f2863e5ae2f6d8ffb.jpg","author_name":"Rayhan Hidayat","comment":"It\u2019s literally the easiest pasta dish to make (probably besides cacio e pepe), go for it!Yes, isn\u2019t it so much better when your stories are ripe for discussion? And no worries!! \ud83d\ude19"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/claire-lindsey\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/722968\/thumbnail_c14c06bb9ae9c6452f59d564cd101eacb0706c59.jpg","author_name":"Claire Lindsey","comment":"Congrats on the win, Caroline! It\u2019s a really excellent submission and you\u2019ve captured so much in your subtext and characters. I love the slow burn (or boil haha) into the real heart of the story, the unwritten tension leading up to their conversation, and that brilliant ending. Beautifully done!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Lololol slow boil, love that. Thanks so much for commenting!!!!!!! I\u2019m glad you liked the story and that the tension buildup was executed right. There\u2019s always that brief hesitation of \u2018am I dragging this out too long?\u2019 But I\u2019m glad you liked it!! Thanks for reading!!! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kylie-gillins-fe015f\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/583573\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Kylie Gillins","comment":"I absolutely love this story it is so realistic and detailed. Thank you for such an honest story."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Thanks so much for reading an commenting!!! And I\u2019m glad you liked the story!! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zyanya\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/934604\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Zyanya . .","comment":"it's very beautifully written. A great story, no doubt!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Thanks so much!!! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/zahra-naazir\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/531637\/thumbnail_2c674dba55aae5fecc9fb0fa28121971871cd95e.jpg","author_name":"Zahra Naazir","comment":"This was an amazing story. So beautifully written. A well deserved win!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/aayonijaa-dixit\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/660295\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Aayonijaa Dixit","comment":"It's beautifully written, and love how you explained even the smallest details. At first to be honest whenever you would mention 'he' I thought the girl was scared of him but it was nice to see that, that was not the case. The ending was simple yet awesome and the last line - love it! Congratulations on the win!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/vickie-culbertson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/339970\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Vickie Culbertson","comment":"Congratulations! I enjoyed how we were taken through the story by way of her thoughts. The pondering and consideration of baking banana bread then dismissing it as time is drawing closer for her roommate to return. The way he demonstrated how much her concern meant to him. She even took the difficult first step of making an appointment for him, dragging him there if need be. He did one of the least pleasant household chores, the bathroom toilet."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sharmishtha-saha\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/806883\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Sharmishtha Saha","comment":"Wow. Amazing."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/deijha-hill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1217242\/thumbnail_39e08b04b560d737eb05fe3bfbe87942af07426a.jpg","author_name":"Deijha Hill","comment":"I know what it\u2019s like to be there for someone who has serious thoughts of suicide and severe depression. This story really hits home. Thank you for writing it."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Glad it hit home for you! I grew up in a place where suicide was kinda a taboo topic but was definitely a very real thing, so I try to embrace it in writing. Thanks so much for the comment!!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/claire-tennant\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/574261\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Claire Tennant","comment":"Very well written. There is enough humour to lighten the load, enough description of pasta to make me hungry, enough subtlety so that the reader gets the message without getting emotionally involved and a perfect climax. Caroline a most deserving win. Congratulations"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/caroline-greaser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/fcebe90d638555b22eb34e8946fc51ec92611ca4.png","author_name":"Caroline Greaser","comment":"Thank you so much!!! And thanks for the comment!!!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/carolina-flores\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/caafa15ec77a41298ea6f4d0d1c26f6269dd834e.png","author_name":"Carolina Flores","comment":"A well-deserved win.Congratulations!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anvi-k\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1222110\/thumbnail_26ba4d52e9e8f86160b18699920b5fbd49d2902c.jpg","author_name":"Anvi K","comment":"Congrats on your well deserved win. I loved the story. It is filled with imagery, adjectives, vivid vocab etc. The perfect story for anyone to get inspired to write."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ruthika-m\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/5e7b60c626a4a77b8adea643b48caae522db1092.png","author_name":"Ruthika M","comment":"Congrates ! Nice story , U deserve it ."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/molly-scully\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/0f249e4e5aa1c61aec7276f8653a07588c89789c.png","author_name":"Molly Scully","comment":"Congratulations! That was written so beautifully. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/iris-orona\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1152542\/thumbnail_021b3305bffaffbb76a8228f1f6c36d0d3207db5.jpg","author_name":"Iris Orona","comment":"Beautiful story. Loved the ending!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/the-sundial\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1229240\/thumbnail_bc471e5b1546d7aa0320a8b50b646991fb7f338a.jpg","author_name":"The Sundial","comment":"Enjoyed the story and the tension the characters had. Bravo"}]