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Michael Mackenzie
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[{"comment":"Great story. His tension and stress were palpable, especially when he was at the store trying desperately to get the drinks. I was surprised by the ending, so creepy! Thanks for sharing!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hazel-ide\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2629606\/thumbnail_57d6cf0e51a90976b8c012b64f5f0b8b404c2366.jpg","author_name":"Hazel Ide"},{"comment":"Scary and really dark. Kept me riveted. Thanks for sharing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-a-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2116734\/thumbnail_2f094db3ef787573fdf14b24d0ba13d085955cdd.jpg","author_name":"Helen A Smith"},{"comment":"Hi Helen, Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story, it is sincerely appreciated. Kindly,Michael","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michael-mackenzie\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/581539\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Michael Mackenzie"},{"comment":"Scary stuff! Your story kept my attention from beginning to end!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-lynn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/2ca7120f8aaf830ff2b38d1ab1e7d1d5b0e8cd5b.png","author_name":"Hannah Lynn"},{"comment":"Hi Hannah! I'm glad it kept your attention. That is always the goal, right? Thanks for reading and sharing a comment. Very much appreciated. Kindly, Michael","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michael-mackenzie\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/581539\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Michael Mackenzie"},{"comment":"I feel so bad for Bobby. Poor guy seems like he\u2019s on the verge of death trying to keep up his grades and everyone\u2019s discriminating against him for it. This definitely echoes the much grimmer parts of university that dark academia usually hides for the aesthetic. Really good, though, I love it!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/luciano-cortese\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3b0e58d43975a3d1f168d4bdb1086aaeae91316a.png","author_name":"Luciano Cortese"},{"comment":"Hi Luciano, Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Your comment about dark academia is very intriguing, will definitely have to look more into that. And I certainly look forward to reading more of your stories as well. Thank again, Michael","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michael-mackenzie\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/581539\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Michael Mackenzie"},{"comment":"Macabre, chilling and suspenseful. Engaging with good pacing. Thank you, Michael! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-corr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/399226\/thumbnail_f852c236b7887828e167de7dd0aa8da34d3823a9.jpg","author_name":"Karen Corr"},{"comment":"Thank you Karen! I sincerely appreciate the comment regarding the pacing as this is always so challenging to do. I look forward to reading more of your work as well, as I am a big fan of dystopian novels\/short stories. Warm regards,Michael","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michael-mackenzie\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/581539\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Michael Mackenzie"}]