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Victoria Macleod
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[{"comment":"Congratulations on your win Victoria, and welcome to Reedsy. Quite an impressive way to start. Look forward to seeing more of your work.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-logue\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2666602\/thumbnail_4d93692a133d5538f69c328d8b1e9e5006ffd2b6.jpg","author_name":"Kevin Logue"},{"comment":"Hi Kevin, thank you so much! I\u2019ve been overwhelmed by all the encouragement and helpful feedback- it\u2019s been such a great surprise and I\u2019m just looking forward to learning more from you all! Thanks again ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Very well written, I found myself morbidly curious on the outcome! So great use of conflict. I thought your prose was also nice and flowed well. The uneasy tone was there from the start, almost like in "A Separate Peace". Well Done! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/theresa-amante\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2633547\/thumbnail_38035643be46ac99c175a30de10624589fde71b2.jpg","author_name":"Theresa Amante"},{"comment":""uneasy tone" yes yes !!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/andrea-condo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2346305\/thumbnail_a78145fff0cb87b1342e797bbbff2d8ebd02398c.jpg","author_name":"Andrea Condo"},{"comment":"Hi Therese, thank you! I\u2019m so glad you felt the unease- I felt it myself. Can I ask is \u201c A separate Peace\u201d a story on here? Will have to check it out!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Yes definitely shares a similar vibe and tension! "A Separate Peace" is a famous book written by John Knowles, about a friendship between two boys and how hidden jealousy caused the unimaginable to happen outcome to happen as a result. Highly recommend "A Sep Peace"","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/devorah-fisch\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2802563\/thumbnail_d3a73e9e4990d4db9b6049c2f22858d1ccb63f40.jpg","author_name":"Devorah Fisch"},{"comment":"No good deed goes unpunished, and in this case the punishment is being delivered through an internal conflict. I could actually see this happening. Raw emotion. I love how you used social media as a device, it felt quite real. Congratulations on the win :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/richard-t-dca88a\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2695107\/thumbnail_a23dc1afb70caf0f833afef13a0e15684436031b.jpg","author_name":"Richard T"},{"comment":"Thank you Richard! I\u2019m definitely drawn to these types of scenarios and have really enjoyed exploring how it might actually feel to be involved. Thanks again! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"This story is a tiny universe of emotions. Well-deserved win","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/temitope-ajao\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2437456\/thumbnail_f85fdd8f5a2f4663e8a30d02b0b518f378674747.jpg","author_name":"Temitope Ajao"},{"comment":"Thank you so much Temitope! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Thank you so much Temitope! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/patricia-jablonski\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/688131\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Patricia Jablonski"},{"comment":"Hi Patricia- thank you! And thanks for the feedback I appreciate it! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"I respectfully disagree. Emma is sad, and worried, and aware that her life is slipping by and she won't get it back. I don't see emotional bankruptcy here, but simply normal and understandable emotion.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ferris-shaw\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2920484\/thumbnail_d6644f8d2f94d51d43c37a7121cf4acff64cb136.jpg","author_name":"Ferris Shaw"},{"comment":"Congratualtions on your win Victoria. Trult deserved. Great emotional story!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kg-green\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2392113\/thumbnail_69be321e3dc74bf8c59624066e275ee71df67567.jpg","author_name":"KG Green"},{"comment":"Thank you KG! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Wonderfully written, Victoria! I was totally hooked the whole time, and your response to the prompt was very creative. I am always in awe of first-try winners, congratulations and welcome to Reedsy!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anders-beckman-ceaddc\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2187956\/thumbnail_c166b22d24d35abbce65a569b2afc15521a30d5e.jpg","author_name":"ANDERS BECKMAN"},{"comment":"Hi Anders! I\u2019m so chuffed honestly, thank you for your enthusiasm! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"This was so well written. Congrats on the win - well deserved. I couldn't read it fast enough. I think there is so much potential for a full on book about the friendship and everything that transpires after the baby arrives! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/andrea-condo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2346305\/thumbnail_a78145fff0cb87b1342e797bbbff2d8ebd02398c.jpg","author_name":"Andrea Condo"},{"comment":"Hi Andrea, thank you so much! I really appreciate that, I actually hadn\u2019t considered breaking it open more for a book but reading your comment has made me consider it ( I\u2019m curious myself to see where it could go) So thank you! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"This was absolutely mesmerizing - I was captivated the entire time. The world you built drew me in and now that it\u2019s over I wish I could read it again for the first time.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amanda-rye\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2283763\/thumbnail_28bc14a4410179b02ee476a19af0dd1f52b239f4.jpg","author_name":"Amanda Rye"},{"comment":"Hi Amanda! Thank you for such a generous comment- I\u2019m so glad you felt that! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Congrats on the win, Victoria. I can't say this isn't the best story in the contest since I haven't read any of the other stories yet. But for the record, I never really knew what was happening for most of this story.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ken-cartisano\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2341188\/thumbnail_950cf5fcb0d8a96924c8343beddc948381e38ff9.jpg","author_name":"Ken Cartisano"},{"comment":"Hi Ken! Thank you! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Great story ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/gerald-daniels\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/930931\/thumbnail_eeb35d331bddcddfdbb0a6d16f64120bb01356fd.jpg","author_name":"Gerald Daniels"},{"comment":"Thank you Gerald! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Thank you Gerald! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-derenbecker\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2702864\/thumbnail_aee74093c5d404e3f4e0c0ed8079a49ea20cefdf.jpg","author_name":"Karen Derenbecker"},{"comment":"Hi Karen! Thank you so much! I also came here to learn and am already gaining so much from the community here- I\u2019m really thankful for it. Thanks for taking the time for the particular encouragement ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Great story :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sidney-aki\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2734892\/thumbnail_229ef2b54a3d75fb0743acc370249f9002ef1a03.jpg","author_name":"Sidney Aki"},{"comment":"Thanks Sidney! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Fine work. I worked on the same prompt and I just noticed that what I considered difficult can be made easy and entertaining. Fine work here. Welcome.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Hi Philip, thank you for the welcome and the encouragement! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"Pleasure.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Great take on the prompt. I can't help but believe you wrote this from personal experience. If so, it's a beautiful story, if not, it's even more so. The descriptions of mundane, every-day tasks are exceptional, you find new ways to paint images that everyone has seen prolifically throughout their modern lives.Victory well-deserved","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/j-s-bailey\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/95f92b2f0cb530542d16d90a6c2af59e20759430.png","author_name":"J. S. Bailey"},{"comment":"Thank you! I\u2019m really glad that you felt it could have been real ( it\u2019s not my story but was inspired by a magazine article I read!) Thank you again! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/victoria-macleod\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2706660\/thumbnail_36443bdfe5234e43e3c9e1c55250863c5fc111bd.jpg","author_name":"Victoria Macleod"},{"comment":"how do you pronouse you last name","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/cheylei-martin\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/3040104\/thumbnail_5a3cd5f95f6a288aef8e668558bee4bda35d4917.jpg","author_name":"Cheylei Martin"},{"comment":"What a beautiful story! Your character's emotions are so real! 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