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[{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jed-cope\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/955220\/thumbnail_5936564c3e47ad10e400b2ed3d80a0472c6e64ef.jpg","author_name":"Jed Cope","comment":"Thanks for this - there's a lot to go at, lovely to see you engaged whole-heartedly with the story. I am fascinated with our defaults and how they drag us away from what counts. Great feedback with regard to pace. I suppose I can be economical with a story at times and I veer away from too much description so that the reader can provide that and engage all the more. To switch focus though and provide respite. I do need to consider that..."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox","comment":"Yes that's one approach. A balancing act to practice mastering here!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jed-cope\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/955220\/thumbnail_5936564c3e47ad10e400b2ed3d80a0472c6e64ef.jpg","author_name":"Jed Cope","comment":"Lots of mastering to be done - that's what keeps it fun and interesting. Different voices, perspectives and methods of expression. One story can be told a thousand times over."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor","comment":"Congrats. At thirty? Anyway, it's old age for ladies. But why didn't they agree by twenty-five?"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jed-cope\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/955220\/thumbnail_5936564c3e47ad10e400b2ed3d80a0472c6e64ef.jpg","author_name":"Jed Cope","comment":"Thanks!Hedging their bets. Gave themselves plenty of time to find someone else..."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor","comment":"It makes sense that way then."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/scott-christenson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1512632\/thumbnail_afc30ec38177d2ec9620254c83d0cd754fcb079c.jpg","author_name":"Scott Christenson","comment":"Congrats on making the shortlist! That was a great observation about what a half-assed promise it is to say if I haven't found anyone better by age 30 i'll checkin wiht you."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jed-cope\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/955220\/thumbnail_5936564c3e47ad10e400b2ed3d80a0472c6e64ef.jpg","author_name":"Jed Cope","comment":"Thanks! People make that promise all the same though - it insults both parties really... I wonder whether anyone has ever made good on it??"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson","comment":"Congrats on the shortlist. \ud83e\udd73 This deserved it. You write so many a week I can't get them all read. I'll just wait till they win. Same as Jonathan Page."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jed-cope\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/955220\/thumbnail_5936564c3e47ad10e400b2ed3d80a0472c6e64ef.jpg","author_name":"Jed Cope","comment":"Thank you! I'm pleased as punch that this got noticed. There's something a little special in this one. Thank you also for having faith in me and these stories of mine. That means a lot."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson","comment":"You deserve recognition. Can't believe how many stories you get out each week. I struggle with one."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jed-cope\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/955220\/thumbnail_5936564c3e47ad10e400b2ed3d80a0472c6e64ef.jpg","author_name":"Jed Cope","comment":"It's all a struggle - you get it and that's big. You wishing me the best is huge. Urging others on as you struggle is testament to your spirit and positivity. Thank you once again."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/marty-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1602139\/thumbnail_75eb3c3fd993fea5d007ba439de5df3343c8c1b5.jpg","author_name":"Marty B","comment":"Gary was carrying a lot of baggage up that hill to the bench. I'm glad Paul was there to help him let go of it."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jed-cope\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/955220\/thumbnail_5936564c3e47ad10e400b2ed3d80a0472c6e64ef.jpg","author_name":"Jed Cope","comment":"It were as though Paul knew his friend and that he had to be there for him one last time. When it counted."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jonathan-page\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2792537\/thumbnail_f2f48d44f760728d0c5aaba532bbf3b068c14409.jpg","author_name":"Jonathan Page","comment":"Touching story Jed! Great take on the prompt."}]

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