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Emily Holding
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[{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/andrea-hanssen\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1479830\/thumbnail_ea60b0ea9715b744d2654e7cb69a3f91a5a25fcb.jpg","author_name":"Andrea Hanssen"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"This comment really moved me, thank you for reading!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alana-hartman\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/bd4b01946d29a04b84f9d1306289b7687d01b8c2.png","author_name":"Alana Hartman","comment":"Congrats on the win!! I can\u2019t believe you won with your first entry! That\u2019s amazing! Please, keep this up! I loved your story!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sarah-martyn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1126596\/thumbnail_b6e37394c0d3170a5227b1c323180d0f98f88eed.jpg","author_name":"Sarah Martyn","comment":"Came here to say this too! Super jealous but also impressed for her. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Neither can I haha! Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed :)"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-corr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/399226\/thumbnail_f852c236b7887828e167de7dd0aa8da34d3823a9.jpg","author_name":"Karen Corr","comment":"A woman caught between her mother\u2019s death and her daughter\u2019s new beginning accompany the guilt that she could have done more, with the rising and unrising sun a beautiful metaphor. Congratulations on your win, Emily!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thank you Karen :)"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amy-curry-9ff8db\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/819848\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Amy Curry","comment":"Congratulations on your win! Beautiful story and I resonate so deeply with being stuck in your own head as she is. The wonderful descriptions leave nothing to the imagination. Well done!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thanks Amy, much appreciated!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson","comment":"Congrats on the win. Been watching and learning for a while, huh? Then, Bam! Win with first entry.\ud83e\udd73\ud83c\udf89"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Definitely haha! There's so much great advice from writers out there, and I finally decided to take the leap :) Thank you!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles","comment":"Definitely haha! There's so much great advice from writers out there, and I finally decided to take the leap :) Thank you!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles","comment":"No surprise here. Let me be the first to congratulate you on a remarkable story."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thank you so much for your kind words and warm welcome Rebecca!! I'll definitely have to check out Swimming Home :)"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles","comment":"You'll love Levy; she's the master of the fractured form."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles","comment":"Welcome to Reedsy, and congratulations! Your writing style is superb. Absolutely stunning. I've learned so much from you with just this story. What a unique and creative approach to the sun setting and rising again. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Oh my gosh, thank you so much!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/315b39a0fc19fb45d146c17b813d46c7acb0b872.png","author_name":"Kevin B","comment":"I thought this prompt would be so hard to accomplish with a limited amount of words, but you captured it all beautifully. Great job."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thank you :)"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anthony-payne-042d8b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2468599\/thumbnail_81bacb76b3f7833e10e015b5933cdaa6d8312a5e.jpg","author_name":"Anthony Payne","comment":"First entry, yet you wrote it with such inspirational confidence, as if this particular prompt truly spoke to you, or you are a diamond in the rough. Well, miss Holding, you've been spotted now. Congratulations, I'm still in the confidence gathering stage myself, but seeing an author such as yourself, as I said before, it's inspirational. Thank you."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"The prompt definitely struck something for me, I'd been in the confidence-gathering stage for a while! I hope you'll take that next step as soon as you feel even a little ready - would love to see your work here :) "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jesper-jee\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/522587\/thumbnail_6f101d85ccc19da78b681d9de696806262d53a4c.jpg","author_name":"Jesper Jee","comment":"I love the descriptions you have in here. Well done!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thank you!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michael-novak\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2862291\/thumbnail_f3eb17d4cac0fd1c1a0bbf8a1e00b3dd048de69b.jpg","author_name":"Michael Novak","comment":"Very nice, although I'm not sure if I understood it all."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thank you for reading regardless"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/geir-westrul\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1773962\/thumbnail_1d24fe322bd4fcef00ecd94df27fc9d3b848e8d2.jpg","author_name":"Geir Westrul","comment":"Emily, this was wonderfully done. The sun reversing, scrubbing, jumping forward, then back, setting, rising, setting, unsetting, becomes a tangible way of showing how memories are replayed, relived, then relived again, out of order, with the meaning coming from the kaleidoscope of images all connected to loss and regret (but with love and beauty too).Very well done, and a deserved win (on your first try). Now you need to write more!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amanda-lieser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/cf681cfbf3c282528fea28596536f592630842e7.png","author_name":"Amanda Lieser","comment":"Hi Emily!Welcome, welcome! And, of course, congratulations! This piece was an absolutely wonderful explanation of the complicated nature of being a woman. I appreciated the way that you juxtaposed the two different lives, one beginning, and one truly ending between the mother and the daughter, as well as the mother in the middle. As a romantic at heart, I sincerely hope that she finds the peace that she wants to, and that her marriage manages to flow back together again. Nice work!! "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/robin-owens-43698\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/470096\/thumbnail_c6fcdcd89ebdf44a3f90d373502b46582480a6c1.jpg","author_name":"Robin Owens","comment":"So so beautiful. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/marilyn-santana\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2947071\/thumbnail_a181df1bf653178087e2c4a1b1a6454d28a53cf3.jpg","author_name":"Marilyn Santana","comment":"I'm speechless right now . This is amazing!!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/dean-duke\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2936733\/thumbnail_3af874f4e29db97b1db3f77861f2491f0378fbf8.jpg","author_name":"Dean Duke","comment":"I'd like to know what happens next "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chalice-davis\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/13378\/thumbnail_5738f85605aa9932228b59cb4d86c3dea76bb0de.jpg","author_name":"Chalice Davis","comment":"Truly exceptional imagery. I was especially drawn to your descriptions of the sky and details from past memories . I did have some trouble following who was speaking but, maybe that was a part of the aesthetic or potentially I missed some smaller details somewhere. Anyways, it was really inspiring to read your writing, you are very talented. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ken-cartisano\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2341188\/thumbnail_950cf5fcb0d8a96924c8343beddc948381e38ff9.jpg","author_name":"Ken Cartisano","comment":"Truly exceptional imagery. I was especially drawn to your descriptions of the sky and details from past memories . I did have some trouble following who was speaking but, maybe that was a part of the aesthetic or potentially I missed some smaller details somewhere. Anyways, it was really inspiring to read your writing, you are very talented. "},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thanks for the feedback, Ken! Everyone has their preferences - I do tend to lean towards stylistic choices more, especially in this piece. Appreciate you reading!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ken-cartisano\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2341188\/thumbnail_950cf5fcb0d8a96924c8343beddc948381e38ff9.jpg","author_name":"Ken Cartisano","comment":"Thanks for the feedback, Ken! Everyone has their preferences - I do tend to lean towards stylistic choices more, especially in this piece. Appreciate you reading!"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor","comment":"Congrats. I can see you for business. Welcome."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thank you :)"},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ashley-soto-prado\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2898142\/thumbnail_3d396fc6e69a75e54f8eaafe8c24ad4fd7a420a2.jpg","author_name":"Ashley Soto Prado","comment":"Congratulations on the win! Amazing that you won with your first entry! Beautiful story, a well deserved win."},{"author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/emily-holding\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2252006\/thumbnail_ce7adf26d07dc78da23371c238f5d5f7a89ab465.jpg","author_name":"Emily Holding","comment":"Thank you very much :)"}]