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Cold Feet

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John K Adams
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[{"comment":"Some great lines here. You made me want the ghost to come through and reveal himself to his wife. Memories, the constant effect of loss, as well as the ghost trying to gently propel his wife to move forward were done with a subtle hand. Good story, not overplayed. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-a-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2116734\/thumbnail_2f094db3ef787573fdf14b24d0ba13d085955cdd.jpg","author_name":"Helen A Smith"},{"comment":"Thank you, Helen. This was fun to write. I'm glad it worked for you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/john-k-adams\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/70c94a757c2ae007ce99d35d3f02b9237082cf60.png","author_name":"John K Adams"},{"comment":"Thank you, Helen. This was fun to write. I'm glad it worked for you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/john-k-adams\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/70c94a757c2ae007ce99d35d3f02b9237082cf60.png","author_name":"John K Adams"},{"comment":"Lovely reflection on grief without being maudlin. Particularly like the way you pair the lifelessness of grief with actual lifelessness: \u2018Like a ghost,\u2019 I thought. \u2018We have so much in common.\u2019 This is nicely done, and I have to say, I was glad she saw him in the end.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Thank you, Laurel. It was an interesting challenge. Fun to write and an opportunity to go a little deeper. Glad it worked for you. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/john-k-adams\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/70c94a757c2ae007ce99d35d3f02b9237082cf60.png","author_name":"John K Adams"},{"comment":"At first it seemed like a character study, but plot showed at the end. I don't believe in ghosts, but well done.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/bonnie-clarkson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/791372\/thumbnail_504ce87e3e7bccf4a61fdbb6dc958332b20ed1ff.jpg","author_name":"Bonnie Clarkson"},{"comment":"Yeah, I don't believe in ghosts either, but the story called. Glad you liked it.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/john-k-adams\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/70c94a757c2ae007ce99d35d3f02b9237082cf60.png","author_name":"John K Adams"},{"comment":"Deftly delivered.\ud83e\udee5","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Thanks, Mary. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/john-k-adams\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/70c94a757c2ae007ce99d35d3f02b9237082cf60.png","author_name":"John K Adams"},{"comment":"So good.I love this analogy: But they felt they were shoring up a wall on the verge of collapse. Each stop-gap solution demanded more ambitious efforts. But short of a complete overhaul, what could they do? Bring in the cranes?The brief burst of violence at the end as a catalyst for Hank 'revealing' himself is well done and perfectly restrained.Great stuff John","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/derrick-m-domican\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2566755\/thumbnail_983972abc17d60193ea1febb8b982ac456426162.jpg","author_name":"Derrick M Domican"},{"comment":"Thank you, Derrick. Considering the topic, it was fun to write.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/john-k-adams\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/70c94a757c2ae007ce99d35d3f02b9237082cf60.png","author_name":"John K Adams"}]