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[{"comment":"Wow! Great story, AnneMarie!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jonathan-page\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2792537\/thumbnail_f2f48d44f760728d0c5aaba532bbf3b068c14409.jpg","author_name":"Jonathan Page"},{"comment":"Thanks so much, Jonathan! I finally get to join the winners circle \ud83e\udd29\ud83d\ude05","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Awesome story, the details transported me there. Congrats!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/debra-koffski\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1774458\/thumbnail_e70bbd37e99d63ae0450e44cc56d54c497b6a943.jpg","author_name":"Debra Koffski"},{"comment":"Thank you so much, Debra!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Great, very suspenseful story with a truly terrifying ending. Congrats on the win","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michele-duess\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/e066dc148a3af0bb86ed9438d432a81402e778bd.png","author_name":"Michele Duess"},{"comment":"Thank you Michele! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"ANNEMARIE. Yay <3 This was on my list to catch up on since I missed last week. I'll circle back to read it. I'm so happy for you! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/danie-holland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1539279\/thumbnail_b88c92d3457247e801eb81b2b5b1207371c175cf.jpg","author_name":"Danie Holland"},{"comment":"Thank you so much, Danie! I've been so behind on reading this week, too. Appreciate all your support, friend!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Sister scribbler! Finally, long overdue, stepping up to lift the trophy \ud83c\udf8a I've been so crazy busy I've not had a chance to read this; I just had to stop by when I saw your name as the winner. I will find a quiet moment this weekend and savour this. Big celebratory hugs across the miles.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles"},{"comment":"Ahhhhh sister scribbler my dreams have finally come true \ud83d\ude2d\ud83e\udd29 thank you for stopping by for the congratulations, means a lot! Ive been thinking about how busy you must be but I know you're still getting some scribbling done somewhere \u270d\ufe0f Big big big hugs! You've been a great inspiration and writing mentor, might not be here without you and all the many talented writers here! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Congrats on the win!\ud83e\udd73\ud83e\udd73\ud83e\udd73 So well deserved.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Thank you so much, Mary!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Congratulations \ud83c\udf89 ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-a-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2116734\/thumbnail_2f094db3ef787573fdf14b24d0ba13d085955cdd.jpg","author_name":"Helen A Smith"},{"comment":"Congratulations \ud83c\udf89 ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/stefan-gonzalevski\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1416842\/thumbnail_71b52630efd3e3a54b3e0deba1fbf02a4ed4ec63.jpg","author_name":"Stefan Gonzalevski"},{"comment":"Thanks Stefan! I'm glad the tension worked well and balanced out with the sexual tension and excitement. This was a bit of a new style for me so I'm very pleased to hear what worked. Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts! I enjoyed your story this week, too. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Emotional roller coaster for this young girl getting the attention of her professor! She knows how wrong it is but doesn\u2019t want to miss out. Well done! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-lynn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/2ca7120f8aaf830ff2b38d1ab1e7d1d5b0e8cd5b.png","author_name":"Hannah Lynn"},{"comment":"Thanks, Hannah! Emotional roller coaster indeed! I think a lot about those intuitive moments. Those microseconds before you realize you've made a mistake and you're in trouble. Scary stuff. Thanks for reading!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Congratulations on the win! \ud83c\udf89 Exciting!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/hannah-lynn\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/2ca7120f8aaf830ff2b38d1ab1e7d1d5b0e8cd5b.png","author_name":"Hannah Lynn"},{"comment":"Thank you, been hoping for one for a long time \ud83d\ude0a","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thank you, been hoping for one for a long time \ud83d\ude0a","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-a-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2116734\/thumbnail_2f094db3ef787573fdf14b24d0ba13d085955cdd.jpg","author_name":"Helen A Smith"},{"comment":"Ugh, this is a lovely comment, Helen! Thank you! The decaying matter was a really fun section to write and once I realized what this professor was up to, it felt like a great foreshadowing moment. I'm glad it made you think, and I am just so grateful for your support! I hope to make it to your story soon!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Your story kept me excited throughout - beautiful descriptions, a high emotional impact, I could relate to the MC and feel the tension building. The ending(s) were truly fascinating - that's some proper mystery (and horror!). Thank you for a good read! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/midnight-young\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/3029685\/thumbnail_7d207ec9881715571b8e0b8a23ca67a8a88e1af0.jpg","author_name":"Midnight Young"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading Midnight! Glad it was enough mystery and excitement to keep you engaged. This was a very different style than I'm used to writing. Welcome to Reedsy and thanks again :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Great writing! How many of those college dorm residents dreamed of a late night rendezvous with the glamorous Professor? You described it wonderfully, with wonderful metaphors of nature, and a rather erotic description of a book! The multiple endings were true horror Thanks! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/marty-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1602139\/thumbnail_75eb3c3fd993fea5d007ba439de5df3343c8c1b5.jpg","author_name":"Marty B"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading and the kind words, Marty! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading and the kind words, Marty! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michal-przywara\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1713834\/thumbnail_301012be3a0fec02410378b488b6176f8dfa6c62.jpg","author_name":"Micha\u0142 Przywara"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading and the kind words, Marty! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Yikes .. if it's okay with you , I have a happy ending in mind. A gripping tale!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/bob-long-jr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2698667\/thumbnail_8afdd83a6aea3292a130fdf56ef1417d743f07b9.jpg","author_name":"Bob Long Jr"},{"comment":"You can interpret it however you'd like, happy endings are good! A rare thing in my stories perhaps \ud83d\ude05","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Chills, disgust, horror (but all in a good way!). I like the ending showing all the different paths.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kailani-bonam\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/560224\/thumbnail_597ae4a52c416f23eeb6f6faffaec7ca5fda0490.jpg","author_name":"Kailani Bonam"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading Kailani!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading Kailani!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/martin-ross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1588316\/thumbnail_73c43818f200fa7558564678b33f5b350e8d12a8.jpg","author_name":"Martin Ross"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading, Martin! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've had too many of these close-call moments which kind of inspired the idea. Funny you mention the "storybook" romance, because initially my idea was to take it that way, making it a happy, romantic ending. But that seemed too unrealistic, since I, too, am a bit suspicious of teacher-student relationships or any that might walk the ethical line. Though, I really liked the idea of a first date inside a library :) Thanks again!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"My stories frequently take an abrupt unintended turn halfway through. My most pre-organized stories are usually my worst, and the ones that come together last-moment are my better ones. I think you made a brilliant, if dark, choice here.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/martin-ross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1588316\/thumbnail_73c43818f200fa7558564678b33f5b350e8d12a8.jpg","author_name":"Martin Ross"},{"comment":"I enjoyed the multiple endings the main character imagines before she opens the door. As readers, we do this along with her, trying to guess how the story ends. In real life, I don't know. I think I pull all the doors open without thinking.\ud83d\ude0a Anyway, great story, AnneMarie!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-corr\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/399226\/thumbnail_f852c236b7887828e167de7dd0aa8da34d3823a9.jpg","author_name":"Karen Corr"},{"comment":"Sometimes I do a lot of things without thinking \ud83d\ude02 and then sometimes I overthink everything! Thanks for reading, Karen!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Winner, winner, but no steak dinner. I found this so well written just like all the commentary.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading, Mary! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading, Mary! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/danielle-lesin\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2976657\/thumbnail_8293a05d501173e09d72324fa3d6070656ac4622.jpg","author_name":"Danielle Lesin"},{"comment":"Thanks for your thorough and thoughtful analysis, Danielle! I really loved playing with the image of the cerulean door being a symbol for many things - all her emotional turmoil as well as this idea that she's in deep water and doesn't quite realize the extent of her danger yet. I'm really glad the balance worked well for you and built up the suspense. It was quite a different style than Im used to and I certainly haven't mastered it yet. I appreciate your investment and time, thanks again!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks for your thorough and thoughtful analysis, Danielle! I really loved playing with the image of the cerulean door being a symbol for many things - all her emotional turmoil as well as this idea that she's in deep water and doesn't quite realize the extent of her danger yet. I'm really glad the balance worked well for you and built up the suspense. It was quite a different style than Im used to and I certainly haven't mastered it yet. I appreciate your investment and time, thanks again!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shirley-medhurst\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/76e8daf43b51c7469b266d37aab6e3ed52f679bc.png","author_name":"Shirley Medhurst"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading, Shirley! I think most professors who prey on freshmen (in any way) are a bit creepy \ud83d\ude2c I'm happy to hear it felt well balanced. That was a tricky thing to execute. Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"}]