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[{"comment":"I think historical fiction of any kind is always so difficult and you did such a great job. The dialogue really popped for me as well. Well done.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/315b39a0fc19fb45d146c17b813d46c7acb0b872.png","author_name":"Kevin B"},{"comment":"Thank you, Kevin.This was my first attempt at a topic I have a great interest in, so that means a lot to me.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"So THIS is what men are always thinking about!I enjoyed the history and the attention to detail in the flashback. The time travel would have been a more interesting surprise\/contrast if we got at least a little taste of the narrator's life before going to sleep at the very beginning. Thank you for sharing it and nice work!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/audrey-knox\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2717123\/thumbnail_d12b99b1aabb817d99513af0548fbd30234d22fb.jpg","author_name":"Audrey Knox"},{"comment":"Audrey,Thanks for reading and commenting. I wanted to pose the question as to whether Spurinna was a time traveller or a true soothsayer - a character similar to how Nostradamus is perceived. His confused state of mind hopefully negated a backstory. It's all about here and now in his waking moments.That said and done, this was merely a fictitious glimpse at one of the most historical days in time.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"Great historical tale!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/jonathan-page\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2792537\/thumbnail_f2f48d44f760728d0c5aaba532bbf3b068c14409.jpg","author_name":"Jonathan Page"},{"comment":"Thank you, Jonathan.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"Historical. Always good to read about Rome and its politics. That year, my ancestors were in their caves, not mud houses, minding their own business. Congrats. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Philip, Thanks for reading and commenting.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"Welcome.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Congrats on your first shortlist!! \ud83c\udf89 I'm sure no-one will be surprised to see this shortlisted!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/khadija-s-mohammad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2783829\/thumbnail_15fe24630bbc15746025a89324f51a49ad206903.jpg","author_name":"Khadija S. Mohammad"},{"comment":"Thank you, Khadija.I am very happy to have a topic I have great interest in, be among the shortlist of wonderful talent here on Reedsy.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"Well written. This story presents a good range of imagery and detail to build a sense of a puzzle, and a glimpse of history. Realistic and evocative. This reader anticipates more fiction written by this author. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/julie-grenness\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/572729\/thumbnail_9b0f8ed05c3646c97273e44517dac89c225b437d.jpg","author_name":"Julie Grenness"},{"comment":"Julie,Many thanks for your great feedback.I've always wanted to write historical fiction. I also have a great interest in Ancient Rome, so this seemed the right opportunity to blend the two.Thanks for reading and commenting.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"I enjoy reading stories that keep my interest, and I don't keep glancing at how much longer the story is. Yours was intriguingly written and kept me engaged. Well done.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/karen-best-wright\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2916395\/thumbnail_04f2cb17dba27849838dd22e626986c2a4b929e4.jpg","author_name":"Karen Best Wright"},{"comment":"Karen,Thank you for your welcomed feedback. So glad you liked it.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"I love it when my basic knowledge of Roman\/Greek gods is put to good use! I also like the term "field to table," it's always fun to see modern ideas used in the past, especially when they could've existed back then too.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kailani-bonam\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/560224\/thumbnail_597ae4a52c416f23eeb6f6faffaec7ca5fda0490.jpg","author_name":"Kailani Bonam"},{"comment":"Kailani,Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my story.The Romans taught us a lot, so "field to table" could have been a tag line back then. However, I think everything was field to table 2,000 years ago.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"What a great personalized spin on a classic event, and a rich sense of time and place! And roast pork hooked me immediately\ud83d\ude09! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/martin-ross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1588316\/thumbnail_73c43818f200fa7558564678b33f5b350e8d12a8.jpg","author_name":"Martin Ross"},{"comment":"Thank you, Martin.As a non-meat eater, I take that as a great compliment. I'm also pleased to have briefly transported you back 2,000 years to a fascinating time and place.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"Oops \u2014 hope I didn\u2019t come off insensitively. Mom was a master of the roast, and the smell is a strong sense-memory stimulus for me. You did a wonderful job in historical recreation. I was once astonished to learn Marcelle Proust was fond of a certain modern sexual verb\/declarative, and imagining him dropping an F-bomb in a literary salon makes me appreciate the humanization of fictionalized history. You did it well.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/martin-ross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1588316\/thumbnail_73c43818f200fa7558564678b33f5b350e8d12a8.jpg","author_name":"Martin Ross"},{"comment":"Thank you, Martin. No sensitivities were hurt in the making of your comments. :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"\ud83e\udd23\ud83d\udc4d","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/martin-ross\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1588316\/thumbnail_73c43818f200fa7558564678b33f5b350e8d12a8.jpg","author_name":"Martin Ross"},{"comment":"\ud83e\udd23\ud83d\udc4d","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-logue\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2666602\/thumbnail_4d93692a133d5538f69c328d8b1e9e5006ffd2b6.jpg","author_name":"Kevin Logue"},{"comment":"Kevin,Thank you so much for your great insight and suggestions. I have actioned them using my own interpretation of the words. Plus, I changed the ending a little. Hopefully, it is improved - as you thought it might.I do have a love of Roman history, so I'm greatly pleased that it shone through.Once again, thank you for taking so much time to read and comment.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"No problem Sol, I just reread it there and I think it flows much better, great work.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-logue\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2666602\/thumbnail_4d93692a133d5538f69c328d8b1e9e5006ffd2b6.jpg","author_name":"Kevin Logue"},{"comment":"Thanks for your great input.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"Congratulations Sol on the shortlist! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-logue\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2666602\/thumbnail_4d93692a133d5538f69c328d8b1e9e5006ffd2b6.jpg","author_name":"Kevin Logue"},{"comment":"Thank you, Kevin.A big shout out to you for your great suggestions.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"Good historical sense.Thanks for reading 'When Falls the Night'And 'Cinnamon Cookie Cure All'Ooh. Nice to see this one on the shortlist. Congratulations! \ud83d\ude0a\ud83e\udd73","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Thank you, Mary.A little creative license was thrown in, as well.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sol-caine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/59aa962f7269a10c4395e01495c04a928240cb5b.png","author_name":"Sol Caine"},{"comment":"We all need that license now and then.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"}]