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Alice Through the Broken Glass

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Riel Rosehill
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[{"comment":"So, good. I loved this! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/danie-holland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1539279\/thumbnail_b88c92d3457247e801eb81b2b5b1207371c175cf.jpg","author_name":"Danie Holland"},{"comment":"Thanks Danie!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"This story was so good, I loved it. To add to that it definitely was very original and had a very unique writing style compared to anything else I have ever read. So overall a very good story. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/anna-dumas\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2143179\/thumbnail_5b97dc2215c4cbf5c6bd4d92f5036065c8c145f5.jpg","author_name":"Anna Dumas"},{"comment":"Hi Anna, thank you so much for taking your time to read my work and leave this lovely comment - knowing somebody enjoyed a story I wrote always makes my day, and this one is one of my personal favourites.Side note - your profile picture is adorable!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"I read this yesterday and remember leaving a long comment on it but can\u2019t find it now! Duh! Must have forgotten to hit submit. Old age \ud83d\ude44Anyway, as so many have said already, this was a brilliant bit of writing, from the plot, to the magical setting to the exploration of the underlying theme. Terrific easy-to-read style too. You have a new fan \u270c\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/viga-boland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/6fdede7befa5cbf3bc6641cf4e8ae6b2ab7a6811.png","author_name":"Viga Boland"},{"comment":"Thank you for taking the time to read and comment - it's much appreciated! It's one of those stories I just loved writing, so I'm super happy you enjoyed it! :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"OMG\u2026how did you come up with this? Pure genius. No wonder it was shortlisted. I bow to your amazing writing talent. Wow!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/viga-boland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/6fdede7befa5cbf3bc6641cf4e8ae6b2ab7a6811.png","author_name":"Viga Boland"},{"comment":"OMG\u2026how did you come up with this? Pure genius. No wonder it was shortlisted. I bow to your amazing writing talent. Wow!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/you-d-think-a-writer-would-have-a-more-creative-name\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/556465\/thumbnail_2668994bdbb51787d7ace19255662e886b0b23da.jpg","author_name":"You'd Think A Writer Would Have A More Creative Name ."},{"comment":"Oh hi!Thanks for this lovely comment - it has absolutely made my day! It's a story I am actually keen to continue and spend more time with these characters. :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Thank you, I enjoyed your story very much. Great job!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michele-cooper\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/dc8d73b2300ecd72072137237d2c68dc0d3a7981.png","author_name":"Michele Cooper"},{"comment":"Thank you Michele! I appreciate you took your time to comment :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"More story? ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tommy-goround\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1810729\/thumbnail_aa576c3db9478034a40fa19154a6978dbfde96ba.jpg","author_name":"Tommy Goround"},{"comment":"In progress!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"You know... I keep popping in here. I almost forget why I stop and want some payoff of a thing called a story.:)I get it. You're gearing up. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tommy-goround\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1810729\/thumbnail_aa576c3db9478034a40fa19154a6978dbfde96ba.jpg","author_name":"Tommy Goround"},{"comment":"Makes me happy to know that! Thank you for returning. There will be more - but yes, right now I have a beast of a project to fight! :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"I love this story! Amazing job!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lilah-hazard\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2008489\/thumbnail_7a673342fdc9793aa6be003bc19ffddc0b753723.jpg","author_name":"Lilah Hazard"},{"comment":"Aww, thanks Lilah! I'm happy you enjoyed it \u263a\ufe0f","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"No problem! :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lilah-hazard\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2008489\/thumbnail_7a673342fdc9793aa6be003bc19ffddc0b753723.jpg","author_name":"Lilah Hazard"},{"comment":"Alice in Wonderland is such a great inspiration for a story! Artie starts off tortured by the past mentally and the vivid detail mentally depicts such a clear visual! Enjoyed: "Follow the fireflies." Thank you for such a great read. LF6","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lily-finch\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1950050\/thumbnail_b490356dc156ee935a33bb63df5547ff88ba5993.jpg","author_name":"Lily Finch"},{"comment":"Thanks for reading, Lily! Your lovely comment is much appreciated :)","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Good job, Riel. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/faith-ewere-david\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1067495\/thumbnail_c6fc80a4ae722a9d3730677290ba256e1b64a732.jpg","author_name":"Faith Ewere David"},{"comment":"Thank you, Faith.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Congrats on the shortlist! I\u2019m super late to the party, but I was so happy to return to find this. (Not to mention Zack won on the same week! Like how cool is that). I hope you celebrated ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/bradon-l\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1705679\/thumbnail_8b183ae0afe2930b2d354b46da70901aecc4caca.jpg","author_name":"Bradon L"},{"comment":"Thank you, I did!And yes, I'm still over the moon my story was listed under Zack's - what an honour!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Unbelievably beautiful. The beginning left me wondering if I should be horrified by what's happening or be awed how perfectly it was narrated that played in my head so visibly. as usual, I am a great fan of your narration. With Alice, I was also completely confused, torn between dream or reality. And again! You did that! Making desperately asking for more! I absolutely need to know how he copes with this lose or if Dustin gonna be there for him!I loved it<3Congratulations on getting shortlisted!! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tamanna-nir\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1561635\/thumbnail_07400e0a027f81cb14333357744544d10359113d.jpg","author_name":"Tamanna Nir"},{"comment":"Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm actually writing their next story for another contest right now (not on Reedsy) as I also wanted a bit more of them - we'll see where it goes! \ud83d\ude01\ud83e\udd1e","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"I love using Alice as an inspiration point and then spinning it out into such a unique new direction. Also the ending hit me like a ton of bricks in the best way. Congratulations on the shortlist!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kevin-b\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/315b39a0fc19fb45d146c17b813d46c7acb0b872.png","author_name":"Kevin B"},{"comment":"Thanks so much Kevin! \ud83e\udd29 Yeah, I felt kind of evil torturing Artie so much (and I'm not even done with him \ud83d\ude08) but I like a good pinch of suffering to season the stories with - glad the end worked for you (I too enjoy a good gut punch)! \ud83d\ude01","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Hi Riel!Oh my gosh I had fun with this piece. Especially since I just recently wrote another Alice in Wonderland themed piece. This story was certainly more than worthy of the short list. It had incredible imagery and I love that we get to meet Alice. I was intrigued on where she would fit in from the very first paragraph. I also love that you had some of those wonderfully recognizable characters for us to hold onto. It was beautifully written. Congratulations!!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amanda-lieser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/cf681cfbf3c282528fea28596536f592630842e7.png","author_name":"Amanda Lieser"},{"comment":"Thanks Amanda, I'm happy you enjoyed it! I just read your story - as soon as I saw the title, I knew I had to! I do enjoy a good play around with the Alice in Wonderland themes, the possibilities are endless. :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"I'm so glad to see you shortlist, friend \ud83e\udd73 I enjoyed this story all the way through. I really liked the dreamy, surreal feeling to it with the Alice in Wonderland ties. Great title, too. I'm looking forward to your next win !","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alex-sultan\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1180040\/thumbnail_9df632f19ea10043b8862beea9e62c26d4bb7f35.jpg","author_name":"Alex Sultan"},{"comment":"Thank you so much, Alex! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Only hoping the next shortlist\/win will be a little closer than 20+ stories away..! :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Fine work Riel. Easy to follow. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Thank you Philip!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"My pleasure","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Clapping","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/tommy-goround\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1810729\/thumbnail_aa576c3db9478034a40fa19154a6978dbfde96ba.jpg","author_name":"Tommy Goround"},{"comment":"Thanks \ud83d\ude03","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Fantastic story! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mike-lavine\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1520279\/thumbnail_be3d94d9b0d671c9e2b9612de8476b00fa023b32.jpg","author_name":"Mike Lavine"},{"comment":"Thanks Mike! \ud83d\ude03","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"CONGRATS friend! So well-deserved\u2764\ufe0f \ud83e\udde1 \ud83d\udc9b \ud83d\udc9a \ud83d\udc99 \ud83d\udc9c \ud83d\udda4 \ud83e\udd0d","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/j-c-lovero\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/308690\/thumbnail_de03a326766475843e32349416cd4f0ef0248313.jpg","author_name":"J.C. Lovero"},{"comment":"Thank you for all your support!!!\ud83e\udd70 So happy to gain shortlister status - show me to the clubroom! We got cookies? Drinks to celebrate with? Woohoo \ud83e\udd29","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Congrats on being Shortlisted!! Way to go!! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/daniel-r-hayes\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/871038\/thumbnail_12d7bb3ce9ad28f83ca790827e8e7cf4f20144b6.jpg","author_name":"Daniel R. Hayes"},{"comment":"Thank you! I can't quite believe it!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/riel-rosehill\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1655093\/thumbnail_1a47db5d8fef674787ee880a3e6a87fedec67e88.jpg","author_name":"Riel Rosehill"},{"comment":"Well, you deserve it. The story was amazing, so you should go celebrate!! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/daniel-r-hayes\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/871038\/thumbnail_12d7bb3ce9ad28f83ca790827e8e7cf4f20144b6.jpg","author_name":"Daniel R. Hayes"}]