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After the Fall

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Laurel Hanson
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[{"comment":"Interesting interweaving of ghosts. It seems Alzheimer's is making Charlotte a ghost of herself, but not in the typical way, while she also sees a sort of ghost of herself in Sadie. Fascinating and touching. Well done!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rj-holmquist\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1564408\/thumbnail_99e8c28d8f5e3b1d7c02f29db8f0e3a422896f5b.jpg","author_name":"RJ Holmquist"},{"comment":"Thank-you. I love that you captured what I was trying to do there.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Thank-you. I love that you captured what I was trying to do there.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/danie-holland\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1539279\/thumbnail_b88c92d3457247e801eb81b2b5b1207371c175cf.jpg","author_name":"Danie Holland"},{"comment":"I've never heard that: "We become who we needed when we were younger." Such an interesting idea. I do appreciate your thoughts on their characters as that is something I am working on my writing. Thank-you for the feedback.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"I've never heard that: "We become who we needed when we were younger." Such an interesting idea. I do appreciate your thoughts on their characters as that is something I am working on my writing. Thank-you for the feedback.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michal-przywara\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1713834\/thumbnail_301012be3a0fec02410378b488b6176f8dfa6c62.jpg","author_name":"Micha\u0142 Przywara"},{"comment":"As always, you capture the essence and intent of the story perfectly. I appreciate your feedback.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Woo! Congrats on the shortlist :) ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/michal-przywara\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1713834\/thumbnail_301012be3a0fec02410378b488b6176f8dfa6c62.jpg","author_name":"Micha\u0142 Przywara"},{"comment":"Appreciated. Not sure I'll submit on reedsy for awhile, but I am likely to check it out periodically to see what else the prodigious Michal has been producing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Captivating. The language. Congrats.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"Thank-you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Pleasure.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/philip-ebuluofor\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/3ddbb55116373e04a0b9c15f93eb1706e4a87bee.png","author_name":"Philip Ebuluofor"},{"comment":"I knew when I read this this morning it would be here \ud83d\ude01 well deserved recognition..hope you are celebrating \ud83c\udf89","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Aww...thank-you. I wasn't expecting it since there are so many stories this week and so many good ones to boot. Cheers!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Agreed! SOO many spooky and creative ghosty stories this week. :) The judges had their work cut out for them this week!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Wow Laurel. What an incredible way to bring the readers along unknowingly. I find it most interesting when a ghost does not know they are one. And I really enjoyed the garden scene when Charlotte first meets Sadie. This was really really well done. Felt like a dream the whole way through. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/annemarie-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1074793\/thumbnail_786bfb7f20f973a65f5da20271b9362eb7875fd3.jpg","author_name":"AnneMarie Miles"},{"comment":"Thank-you so much!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"I tremendously enjoyed the narrative, it really held up the suspense of Charlotte\u2019s state of being. Also written in such a great tone. A wonderful story!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/cher-zimmerer\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/1abd761884ed31397162c678cc45dbd15b20cdf0.png","author_name":"Cher Zimmerer"},{"comment":"Thank-you so much!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Thank-you so much!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ken-cartisano\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2341188\/thumbnail_950cf5fcb0d8a96924c8343beddc948381e38ff9.jpg","author_name":"Ken Cartisano"},{"comment":"Thank-you. I do have a question though. Did you submit to this contest? The last story I have of yours is the prior contest. By the way, I had read it and seem not to have left the note I thought I had, so apologies. Anyway, Cheers.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Thank-you. I do have a question though. Did you submit to this contest? The last story I have of yours is the prior contest. By the way, I had read it and seem not to have left the note I thought I had, so apologies. Anyway, Cheers.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/ken-cartisano\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2341188\/thumbnail_950cf5fcb0d8a96924c8343beddc948381e38ff9.jpg","author_name":"Ken Cartisano"},{"comment":"It\u2019s the ghost of Alzheimer\u2019s that is haunting the old lady. Complex, sad and touching. You depict the difficulties of ageing so well. Great imagery. Thanks for sharing. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/helen-a-smith\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2116734\/thumbnail_2f094db3ef787573fdf14b24d0ba13d085955cdd.jpg","author_name":"Helen A Smith"},{"comment":"Thank-you. I appreciate your kind words.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Ooh, this is a very cool take on the prompt! I really love it, especially when she goes looking for things she can't find...I love knowing what the character doesn't. I can't even come up with a critique, which is rare for me! Nice job.I'd love your feedback on my latest!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rachel-kenley-fry\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/840953\/thumbnail_f5288efef2da3b8264064cbffd48af8c08ba669a.jpg","author_name":"Rachel Kenley Fry"},{"comment":"Great piece of writing, Laurel. Full of lovely little philosophical snippets like : \u201cSometimes it\u2019s just better to be there\u2026\u201d The way you used it said so much.I also like the way you weave multiple layers into the story, making it much more than a classic \u00ab\u00a0ghost story\u00a0\u00bb Interesting that Sadie meets Charlotte on both a spiritual and physical level. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shirley-medhurst\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/76e8daf43b51c7469b266d37aab6e3ed52f679bc.png","author_name":"Shirley Medhurst"},{"comment":"Rich and multi-layered. Led me though many thoughts and ideas throughout. So nicely done. Even the title had duel meaning.Congrats on well deserved shortlist!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mary-bendickson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2406977\/thumbnail_9d140900216bbe13149833dafd263c47a6488424.jpg","author_name":"Mary Bendickson"},{"comment":"Thank-you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Thank-you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles"},{"comment":"Wow, I really appreciate your kind words. As you noted, I've been out for a long spell working on a very different project and thought maybe a palette cleanser might be good writing practice. I am not sure how I feel about this one just yet, but feedback from a writer of your caliber is certainly heartening. Thank-you so much.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Well done Laurel. I did enjoy this carefully constructed and moving story. Looks like a palette cleanser once in a while is a good thing!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/rebecca-miles\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/1835509\/thumbnail_e6ad70a331c99c5d6e41c03a3825e62d34021d98.jpg","author_name":"Rebecca Miles"},{"comment":"Thanks!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"Wow Laurel. This is a heartbreaker. Really mysterious, lots of hints and red herrings before the explanation is given. I loved this. Thanks!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/derrick-m-domican\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2566755\/thumbnail_983972abc17d60193ea1febb8b982ac456426162.jpg","author_name":"Derrick M Domican"},{"comment":"Much appreciated. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"},{"comment":"\ud83e\udd29\ud83d\ude0d Amazing story. Congrats on the shortlist \ud83c\udf89\ud83d\ude04","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/khadija-s-mohammad\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2783829\/thumbnail_15fe24630bbc15746025a89324f51a49ad206903.jpg","author_name":"Khadija S. Mohammad"},{"comment":"Thank-you so much!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/laurel-hanson\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2193245\/thumbnail_e78b6b90fdd86bf24c2c5d3ae752cec9ccd79093.jpg","author_name":"Laurel Hanson"}]