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Adelaide's Cemetery

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Lucy Joyce
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[{"comment":"Love this! Your writing is melodic, the descriptions are downright visual, everything from the disgorged clumps of earth to the memories of Alice. Very much enjoyed reading it and I loved the way it went from a nostalgic tale of longing to desperation to be seen...even if that meant scaring the new Alice. Well done!! Congratulations!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lindsay-flo\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2093406\/thumbnail_8b2fe12ffa94692b762ee1fce7c429c4b7a24795.jpg","author_name":"Lindsay Flo"},{"comment":"this story was so mystifying and amazing. I don't want to be needy but I feel like this deserves a part 2!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/chloe-yan\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/c44de80e93e02bfee706c65007a9e6f4e16bde07.png","author_name":"Chloe Yan"},{"comment":"Hi Lucy!Welcome to Reedsey and CONGRATULATIONS on the win! This was such a beautiful piece and a thrilling take on the prompt. I loved the intense imagery and the way you showed us how dynamic your MC was BEFORE we felt the way the tour guide was seeing her. I also loved the way the story wove in and out of the past and present. That final paragraph was incredible. Nice job! ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/amanda-lieser\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/cf681cfbf3c282528fea28596536f592630842e7.png","author_name":"Amanda Lieser"},{"comment":"SO FREAKING BEAUTIFUL","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/an-awesome-author\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2713716\/thumbnail_40b6ba7993233a9e5ab18cf214bf9578e259421d.jpg","author_name":"An Awesome Author"},{"comment":"Well done! A full sense of history and a terrifying conclusion can be hard to pull off and you did it well.Okay, you deserve the win. \ud83c\udfc6 ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kendall-defoe-ce7767\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/590206\/thumbnail_867b9a00623e417b4844f0dffcffb808848bad58.jpg","author_name":"Kendall Defoe"},{"comment":"I don't know how to describe the imagery in this story. Your writing leaves me wanting more, a book, a series! I am highly interested in your work now. This story is beautifully sad, mystifying, and gorgeous, words cannot describe how lovely this story is. I can't wait to read more of your marvelous writing, have a good day\/night\/afternoon!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kspossibly-3\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2161337\/thumbnail_2b318769da0934cb519dd627b3b20f0a7fd90bad.jpg","author_name":"Kspossibly <3"},{"comment":"I don't know how to describe the imagery in this story. Your writing leaves me wanting more, a book, a series! I am highly interested in your work now. This story is beautifully sad, mystifying, and gorgeous, words cannot describe how lovely this story is. I can't wait to read more of your marvelous writing, have a good day\/night\/afternoon!","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/leo-aguilar\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/477fb3d276f0ddffc6b5bb16069ef86bead2a042.png","author_name":"Leo Aguilar"},{"comment":"I liked it, and I think her longing to be seen is amazing.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/lizzy-hardy\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/3021728\/thumbnail_6f525303e033658e0856d2bd52be6683549dc0a8.jpg","author_name":"Lizzy Hardy"},{"comment":"Very interesting! I enjoyed it :D","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/mia-martinez-5711bf\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2782905\/thumbnail_abd083f5d828565eea55866051651d8a77a73d3a.jpg","author_name":"Mia Martinez"},{"comment":"Wow, I was intrigued. Very good. I will follow you.","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/brynn-holloway\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2711453\/thumbnail_2e4c01aaa93e9db3c0e415e11979484f0301c763.jpg","author_name":"Brynn Holloway"},{"comment":"awww why was alice scared?","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/brandi-martin-ec470d\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2701332\/thumbnail_080a6a4bb045c0d0af597aa94cce6d7939a45cb7.jpg","author_name":"Brandi Martin"},{"comment":"A truly haunting story. Wonderful imagery. ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/shannon-c\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2628184\/thumbnail_105c93511178ba096f591acf33a9d2381ce34952.jpg","author_name":"Shannon C."},{"comment":"Love it sooo much ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/delilah-england\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2671051\/thumbnail_655215ba1b76b0df7b94c179d3632981e32663b3.jpg","author_name":"Delilah England"},{"comment":"you are so good I will give it a HUNDRED out of TEN","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/kane-matthews\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2513189\/thumbnail_ee07897c3af9b301421a1da745fe5f6ee35c93df.jpg","author_name":"Kane Matthews"},{"comment":"thanks.I loved it. Beautifully written.I am new here and this is the 1st story I've read.I hope the others will be as good as this one.Phil from France ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/phil-good\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2344752\/thumbnail_7cefecadeb14ab3b197ddace755a7b60b07168b6.jpg","author_name":"Phil Good"},{"comment":"Mesmerizing story and writing. Any more? ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/wally-schmidt\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2197990\/thumbnail_25078a88fc6eac69aeb4facbfbd2f9032f93426f.jpg","author_name":"Wally Schmidt"},{"comment":"like this book was amasing","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/as-04-hm-902346-derry-west-village-ps\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2248345\/thumbnail_9d6c1c64cf5aa10cd82a77f575b7c813c5f1a4fe.jpg","author_name":"AS - 04HM 902346 Derry West Village PS"},{"comment":"I wrote a good story: please go read it ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/alok-babu042\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/auth\/avatar\/2166808\/thumbnail_4112a92022022ed084260e1bfd044c3cef9ca1a3.jpg","author_name":"Alok Babu042"},{"comment":"I wrote a good story: please go read it ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sarah-allwood\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/688ca1ff2e3800eca1ebe3cfa9a03dd2c3ad27d2.png","author_name":"Sarah Allwood"},{"comment":"I wrote a good story: please go read it ","author_url":"https:\/\/blog.reedsy.com\/creative-writing-prompts\/author\/sarah-allwood\/","author_avatar":"https:\/\/images-cdn.reedsy.com\/avatar\/default\/688ca1ff2e3800eca1ebe3cfa9a03dd2c3ad27d2.png","author_name":"Sarah Allwood"}]